Binding.
Wrapping.
Suffocating.
Hold it tight.
Hold it still.
Strike.
Slash.
Strike.
Hold it still.
Taste it, divine.
The divine taste of death.
Hold it in the hand.
Of my brutal murderer.
Myself. In depth.
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Written January 1st, 2006
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Hmmmm. this one a little disappointing after reading firest ne which was really great. Not so keen on the gaps between the lines. Try one more!
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amazing!!! yay!!!!!
hey i read it again! an now i understand it! lol i must have bin having a stupid day wen i read it the 1st time =\ lol yay im so excited. pwb cld u comment on some of mine? love yew hun xxxxxxxx be happy, an jus follow ur heart to make da right decision, ok? u kno wot im talk bout lol xxxxxxxxxx love ya xxxxxxxx -
oooooo, is this like vampyric lust or something? lol, very well written, well chosen words were used, very effective and well presented. Keep writing
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nice poem hun.... but i dont get it =( lol o well good write xxxxLuvsyaxxxx
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