Another year of broken promises
Shattered hearts
Crystal tears
Unfaithful lovers
Deceitful friends
Another year of lonely nights
Days longing for your touch
Evenings spent alone
Another year of marital problems
Lost relatives
Stricken with disaster
Poisoned families
Hysterical other half's
Never knowing when life will be taken
When it will be gone for good
Who your going to leave behind
The impact you'll have on people
Wasted life drowning in mistakes
Choking on thoughts of you
Christmas eve, new years day
Celebrations stopped
Setting the mood for the year
Have a good one
Happy new fucking year
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R.I.P
Written January 1st, 2006
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Beautifully expressed, although the content is painful to read as I too know the lack of happiness in the New Year. I think I wrote a poem similar to this, so it's good to be able to relate. Excellent
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happy new year! and it will b a happy one i promise! if not u kno where i am!!!
my phones broke atm but emails are good too!!!
take care,
Bryony
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wow very powerful, straight to it....have to say i kinda thought that myself...but not so fierce.
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thanks for the comment
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Not i nice feeling i know. Thankyou for the comment i really appreciate it
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thanks i apprecaite your comment
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Hey this is really good, i know exactly what you mean. i dont see the bid deal in it, i just think people want a reason to get drunk and act stupid. but anyways great write keep it up
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your poem reminds me of holidays or events spent with an alcoholic spouse or family member. it sucks the joy right out of the day like a big ole turkey baster and leaves you mad. your words describe exactly how i felt at those times.
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Yeah, that was good. I don't know how to respond to it, so yeah. Good write
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