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Single yellow rose

swimming
in a lonely vase -
yellow rose

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Written January 1st, 2006

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  • leander Moderators member
    February 6, 2006
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    off course I even think it would give an extra dimension when you switch the yellow and lonely with each other


  • Sonja
    February 6, 2006
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    Oh my ROFL, I hope that you have enough hair on your head. Ok, I would like to folow your suggestion, don't want to be guilty for your "naked" head, but it must be yellow rose, not yellow vase. Can you deal with this idea?
    ~Sonja~

  • Sonja
    January 3, 2006
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    If you must to think about a meaning, than my effort wan't in vain. Thank you for this interesting contest.
    ~Sonja~


  • Dienush
    January 3, 2006
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    This seems kind of confusing, but I guess it's just me. I'm not sure what you mean, but this really made me think and feel, which is what poetry is for, after all. ...still struggling to get it. Thank you for entering.