Cacophony of a Teenage Girl by wbiro at All poetry

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xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Lies! diary, STAR, chummies, chocolate, frappuccino, dying... blue, brown, chemist, lawyer, iPod baby, boy-destroyer!			xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx fake hair n nails false eyelashes, Orlando Bloom just gives me flashes! Xanga, Livejournal, MTV; I’m not allergic to anything!	Bloom!
	xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx					xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Coke, limes, Burger King-a, greeny-peppery-tomato pizza! cheated on my b'friend-other, can't be seen out with my mother!
	Weezer	xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Black Eyed Peas, shopping, Thirteen, Green Day, chatty, icy skatey! running, Weezer, Ghost Ships sailing, skiing, myspace, broken TV!			xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx I want children of the future, always hyper lots of sugar! I wear glasses, contact lenses, I would die for all my friendses!
								xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx sushi, money, video games, r.u.n.n.i.n.g. from the drops of rain! knife, razor, paranoid, threesome pickle in the void!
	mood swings usually pessimistic, really fast at my linguistics! sweatpants, pj’s bought for triplets, Michael Jackson, country music!						xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx punky, preppy, sci-fi movies, piercings, working, water rafting! biting nails, cell phone calls, I even watch the ...
				xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx I am happy at this moment, proficient on my musical instrument! sea turtles, prophetic dreams, pyro, sausage, I love ice cream!					xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx I love drama, I love to shop, I have a crush... please, help me stop! ghetto, bourgie, and until I'm older I'll wear sweaters around my shoulders!

Voices, voices calling me... it's just a big cacophony!

Author notes

Green Day rocks my socks!
(Dark Tear made me say it!)
(and she may recognize who this poem is based on!)
I found the whole thing fascinating! I hope you do, too...
and a thank you to DarkTear just for existing!

Written January 1st, 2006

In a list

A contest entry

Second Contest, 5 Choices! by DarkTear. 300 points, ended January 14, 2006, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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wbiro
January 13, 2006
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Ah! You noticed! Yes, pure inspiration... I just liked your spirit! I hope I captured some of it!
DarkTear
January 13, 2006
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Aaw that is sooo awesome! I can't believe you actually went through the trouble of looking through my author's page and myspace so you could find stuff out about me! I love it love it love it!!
wbiro
January 1, 2006
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glad you liked it... you'll be there in a few years... right? lol
Miss Splenda
January 1, 2006
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Hahaha. How true. This is hilarious!
January 1, 2006
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Talent and creativity being displayed!
Well with so much creativity that put you as an inventor, which I know you can make lots of money for doing this! The computer graphics is excellent, and I think this involves hard work and talent.
It is unique and awesome in a very good way and for this you deserve an applause from me my brother tomerick!
Good work!

P.S. Got the background music too! lol
wbiro
January 1, 2006
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Thanks, my loving daughter! I just changed the title to better reflect the piece! (which I drew from the contest host! ) (I'm also adding a music link to 'American Idiot'... Glad you liked it!
wbiro
January 1, 2006
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Thank e, and thanks for the link!
Edited on Jan 01, 11:56 because ''.
ecrivain01
January 1, 2006
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good job
This is a hoot. I have never seen a poem formatted this way, but it works for me. Good job.