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Track 8.
Don't you love me anymore
As my teardrops hit the floor
Don't you love me anymore
I thought we'd be forevermore
But you don't love me anymore
Hearts are shattered on the floor
Misinterpret me no more
Do you love me anymore
For my heart's cut to the core
I thought my songs you did adore
All the times I'd sing to you
Now I don't know what to do
Do you love me anymore
There was a place beside your shore
But you don't love me anymore
Don't you love me anymore
As my teardrops hit the floor
Don't you love me anymore
I thought we'd be forevermore
But you don't love me anymore
Author notes
I know, it sucks,
but that's about all I have right now.
Thanks for reading me, I know, it's painful. 
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~ 
Written December 31st, 2005
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awww its ironic i would read this but mine comes in a
different way me and my little brother we havent been getting along and i feel so torn right now and this what i feel like he dont love me no more
you crushed me hon it was a pleasure
Jewels
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i hope i have not already commented on this. how do i keep ending up doing that. anyway. this is so and i am sending you a
to make my brother feel better. how could anyone not love you? not a possibility in this sister's knowledge of life as it should be. vl
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Once again, another great poem. So sad yet beautiful. Great write.
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I like the rhyme and repetition in this. You use it very effectively. Good write.
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Was wondering where you were, and I stumble upon this. So very sad and heartfelt. You bring to mind questions we all ask at some point in time, they are also ones we hope to never ask ourself. It brings pain to my heart to know that this is happening to one of the most wonderful people I have met at this site!
Keep writing dear Timothy, if for no other reason, I think it takes the pain away! And know that many here are sending our thoughts and {{{{HUGS}}}} your way!
Deb
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Timothy,
You have such a wonderful heart. Your soul and very being is beautiful! Happy New year Friend
Savina
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Timothy, This was sad although it flowed like a country song pretty well anyhow. I'm sorry things aren't going well. I do hope there will be some better days for you this new year. Sherry~
Edited on Jan 01, 6:03 p.m. because ''. -
Wonderful
I love it! It's so wonderful with beautiful descriptions even though it's sad and makes me want to cry. My heart goes out to you. Lovely poem!
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I ask the same questions of the one I love everyday. I feel like I have done something so wrong and so badly that he doesn't love me anymore, and I just want to know why? This piece was very emotional very raw, very heartfelt. No matter the distance, no matter the miles, I'll love you forever and all the while
Love ya bro
~Carrie -
Perfect Heart Break, If There Is Such A Thing
All the times I'd sing to you
Now I don't know what to do
Do you love me anymore
There was a place beside your shore
But you don't love me anymore
So sad...Makes me want to cry! I think I will...
You have such a sweet heart, makes for easy hurting,
guard yourself, for many will destroy what takes so long to build.
Ya!
Karen/aka poetryrocksmysox
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Excellent!
WOW!!! THis hit me like a ton of bricks, a hard hitter here indeed Timothy! I love ya!
Don't you love me anymore
As my teardrops hit the floor
Don't you love me anymore
I thought we'd be forevermore
But you don't love me anymore
Hearts are shattered on the floor
Misinterpret me no more
Do you love me anymore
For my heart's cut to the core
I thought my songs you did adore
All the times I'd sing to you
Now I don't know what to do
Do you love me anymore
There was a place beside your shore
But you don't love me anymore
Don't you love me anymore
As my teardrops hit the floor
Don't you love me anymore
I thought we'd be forevermore
But you don't love me anymore
Very Powerful, pen on poet!
Trish
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Excellent Expressed!
Oh, Timothy, how my heart goes out to you, I so wish you felt better than this, and on top of everything, it's New Years!
I hope you find someone who deserves you, for I know there are some loving people out there, but I've personally never met anyone as loving as you!
In hopes you feel better soon, but what a heart-felt piece.
As you say, thanks for being you, and much love, always!
magicalprincess
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Thanks for the visit and reading me, Jim, I hope this New Years is a good one! Thanks for being a friend!
-Timothy -
Such beautiful and sad lyrics. Have a great year Timothy, and a happy one.
Jim -
awww i think im gonna cry...i havnt talked to u in awhile and i miss you!!! hope you are alright...i am always here for you timothy...hope u had a good christmas /new years...didnt get 2 wasted i hope..lol well ill ttyl
love ya
Mandy -
the right music and this can be a song in more ways that one.a country tone,another somebody done somebody wrong song,a bluesy type,a don't play another love song,song.either way it goes ,it would be a great song .slow or upbeat would do.timothy,you are indeed a lover and not a fighter.happy new year,my sweet.may the sweet dove of love always dance upon your heart.
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it is so sad to see my poor dad suffering, i hope so much for you to feel better, i wish i could take all the pain away with the snap of my fingers... but since I can't, I shall try to be as loyal as I can, i love you so much... nice piece written here, very poetic and heartfelt even for this little piece...
love your son,
tim -
Dearest Timothy my soul brother,
I love you in my heart as no other
On this New Years Eve
May the wings of love find thee
May love walk in the in door
Resting forever upon your shores
You deserve love now and forevermore
A time for tears but don’t cry anymore
Love walked out my door
I swore I’d love once more
A powerful lyrical sad song
Of love and loss the die cast
You’re watching the sunset last
My dear friend on the wings of sadness
I feel your “teardrops hit the floor”
You’re tired of hurting anymore
Your song makes perfect sense
You’re a loving friend emotional intense
I pray in the next coming years
Love will find a way to erase the tears
Sorrow knows nought a home
True love is your rightful throne.
I wish you love
I wish you peace
I wish you happiness
I wish you tenderness.
Namaste Blessed Be, there” ain’t no sunshine” when love reclines.
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Weird Al Yankovich did a parody on this... so I thought this was going to be a parody on an apparently whiny phrase! Lucky for him he never had the line actually directed at him! (me several times on AP here... and each time it was both surprising and not true!) Maybe I'll embellish on that... something like, 'She tells me I don't love her any more, but I do... I'm just tired... I hope she doesn't walk away...'
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LOL at your comments poetic. This is a good poem with a sad refrain. I like it. Take it easy on yourself Take it easy on yourself cuz breaking up is... so very hard to do... uh oh I couldn't resist breaking into that old song. Anyway really this is good.
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Brought tears to my eyes...this poem was so heartfelt. Nice job.
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doesnt suck at all! i loved it, it hits a little too close to home for me but thats the best kind. very good write, i wouldnt change a thing. Very well done!
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Simple, heart-wrenching. A perfect way to ring out the year. Keep writing!
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Good job. Just needs some polishing, but the solid foundation is there! Bravo! A difficult topic, indeed.
Cris -
good,strong emotion
This a a heart wrenching tribute to the age old question we all
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wow this is a very powerful, deeop, emtoional and poetic piece, im amazed and shocked all at once, this is amazing, and a piece to be proud of...the rhytm and rhyming was awesome and really drew me into the piece! Once again well donem l8az sky xxx
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This was emotional. Good work.
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I don't understand how love seems to be on the run...I feel for you, as my own heart-breaks, I give you a piece..Much love, Timothy
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This poem is so emotional.I seriously loved it....I can relate because I was in a very serious relationship and hen it ended and now he doesn't even want to be my friend....so I can relate....GREAT WRITE!
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awesome poem... I love it... Is it true?
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this is awesome.. It's really sad, but i still luv it :-)
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This peice...is amazing. It's so similiar to my current emotions...it almost hurts to read it. Very powerful, and keep the writing up. Beautiful.
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sad and very loving
I know how sad that write is -- the last few days thats what I have wanted to do but the tears wont stop especially when I am alone. I almost feel as if ...........-- you know life is against me as if things are MY FAULT. Well you know why I would wonder things from what we talked about my friend.
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I enjoyed this poem.It's sad and many people can relate to it.Wonderful write.
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