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Me mE ME!

Me mE ME

mE be sO CuTe
mE be sO fInE
i CaN WrItE tHiS wAy
aLL ThE TimE

yOu CanT hANdLe mE bEaUty
iTS goNiNG tO yOuR hEaD
DoNt WaNna rEaD THiS
tHeN gO To BeD

yOu ThiNk tHiS iS aNNoyInG
sO dO i
BuT whO cArEs
i'M jUsT sO FlY

mE LooK sO GoOd
yOu'Re CuTe toO
i MiGhT gRaCe yOu wiTH mE bEAty
KnoWInG i cAn eASilY gEt YoU

i CaN MaKe yOu lOVe mE
WiTh tHiS PoeM i'M WrIttInG tO YoU
WaiT..........WHaT dId yOu SaY
YoU loVE mE, GoOd, i LoVe mE ToO

Me mE ME

Author notes

~monkey nuggets~ LOL!!!!!!!!!
Written December 31st, 2005

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    Hey! Congratulations on the big Gold! It's a cute and witty little poem and now I see where you got your motto from. Miss you!

    Ted E


    • DarkChildsKiss silver member
      February 18, 2008
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      Yeah I like this little saying. And I'm glad that others do too.
      P.S. I miss you too!


  • theDARK1 gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    i have a few poems written that way. never knew someone would host a contest for them though. guess i was on the DARKside of the moon too long to notice. congrats on the gold, DARK.


    • DarkChildsKiss silver member
      February 17, 2008
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      Yeah well I love trying something new. Thank you for the applause because I could use the points. lol.

  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    June 18, 2006
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    It actually takes a long time to write like this. So when others do I respect them for it because it is much easier to just write normal. And......I won GOLD! YaY mE!


  • Shakari
    June 18, 2006
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    This piece is hilarious! I have never seen an actual write with sticky caps, but you have done excellently! They do get annoying, yet the humor you put into your writing was not at all! After all, you put a fantastic flow and rhyming scheme into the piece. Keep up the great work! I hope you did well in the contest!


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    June 6, 2006
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    Yeah it does take a good while to write in this form. And I appreciate your comment.


  • manasvi
    June 6, 2006
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    whoa i really liked the effort you must have put into this..cuz i know for a fact it takes more time to write a poem this way than it would writing it normally..appluase for that!
    this was really interesting and refreshing..glad i read it!
    much love,
    -manasvi.


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    January 4, 2006
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    Aw thank you. I'm glad that it made you feel that way!
    ~Jay~

  • HatedPet
    January 4, 2006
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    it's so cute!! and it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    January 2, 2006
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    Well I have very little problem reading it. I do think it looks a bit odd though. My biggest problem with this is it takes FOREVER to write like that. And thanks for your comment.


  • Shakes-spear
    January 2, 2006
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    This was very cute and I think that the write was harder to read like this and can see why so many don't like this method of writing! The Shaker
    Edited on Jan 02, 10:07 p.m. because ''.


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    January 1, 2006
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    Well ThAnK yOu! I'm glad that you like this. Oh thanks for the applause


  • Psycho Dancer ---
    January 1, 2006
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    wooooooooooo fab!

    i really liked that! i love the way you use stick caps, (they are actually cool!) lol...great message inside as well!


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    December 31, 2005
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    I have never heard that song before but thanks. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

  • Big Hearted one
    December 31, 2005
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    lol i love it this is a great poem it makes me think of this country song that goes somewhat like this " i wanna talk about me i wanna talk about i i wanna talk number one oh my me my " anyway thanks for sharing this it's pretty good i enjoyed it very much


  • Iohagh
    December 31, 2005
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    I love it. Thanks so much.


  • Faded Existence
    December 31, 2005
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    NIIIICE

    HAHAH! LMAO!! THIS IS HILARIOUS!!!!! LOVED IT... GREAT WRITE SIS!!! MAN... THAT IS JUST SOOO ADORABLE.... AND ACTUALLY STICKY CAPS IS EASIER TO READ THAN I THOUGHT... I DON'T SEE WHY PEOPLE HAVE A PROBLEM WITH IT! ANYWAYS LOVED IT GREAT JOB...!
    ~AMBER~

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