I can't do this anymore
The pain hurts too bad
My feelings for him won't just go away like you want them to
He was something very important to me
And with every chance you got you tried to take him away from me
Why are you trying to hurt me so much
Why can't you just let me be with him
At least he makes me happy
At least he listens to me
Everything I ever wanted in a guy he has
I wish you could just understand that I don't want you anymore
Face the fact
My feelings for you have gotten weak
Nothing i felt for you in the past will come back
Not even if you take him away from me
My feelings for him are strong
I knew that he cared about me
I seen it in his eyes
But when i looked in your eyes..all i saw was hate
It's like when I'm lonely and depressed you love me
But once I find someone for me you try everything in your power to stop it
I cant take this anymore
I need him back
The memories we had always play in my mind
The feelings i got when he hugged me
The way he smiled and told me he loved me
I need to feel loved again
I can't stand to look at you anymore
It's like I have to put on a fake smile,a fake laugh,a fake feeling
when I'm with you
When i hug you, i close my eyes and think its him
Do you want that?
I know that being with me helped you
I understand you think I'mma get hurt
But let me go
Let me make my faults and my mistakes I need that
Maybe he isn't right for me
But I'll never know unless you let me be with him
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Written December 31st, 2005
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Thanks a lot Just4u...you really made a point there.Seems like that is what is happenin
Thanks so much for the applaud...it will be taken as heartfelt.I'm glad you enjoyed this poem so well 
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A nice interaction showing how some are possessive and the other
ends up caught in the middle of staying and leaving.
Love ends up complicated because we implant our beliefs of what a person is with only one glance. He looks...nice, kind, probably a good dancer...it is human nature and then when they turn out different that what we "thought" they we were like we are surprised, but we saw what we "wanted" to see in them and not what was really there. And therein lies the solution to our problem...see what is really there in a person and not what we wish to be or what we think they have that will fulfill OUR need in the end. It just isn't the youger crowd but the older that does this too...for it they didn't they were never be a breakup in any relationships...ever...
Eddy
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thanks...whyd you say sorry? anyway thanks for ur lovely comment
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hey im sry.. this is the good thing bout poetry that u can just let ur feelings out. u dont need a man to make u happy cuz u have friends by ur side. i dont know u but if u wanna talk just im me or sumtin k. goood job luv this poem
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Thanks gurl!
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Wow, this is so dead on with what im feeling right now, its not even funny. Seriously hun, you did a great job with just showing your feelings, wish i could do the same. Take care and stay strong.
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Thanks a bunches for your comment.I'm sure if i need someone to talk to.....you will listen
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hey huni it's really sad this poem i hope you get the guy you want and not the one you don't want i agree with gerads guys and love are complicated but i hope you find a nice guy that loves you and treats you right cos you derseve it huni best of luck wid da furture memba i'm always ere for ya hunni xxxxxxx -
Thanks for your lovely comment!!!!!! It means a lot to me.
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i like this a lot. guys and love are two of the most complicated subjects and i find myself going nuts over them too. nice poem. keep up the awesome work!
xoxo love autumn
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