Our
almost touch
with a glint has built
new connection between us.
Colours of love, soft explosion.
Colours of love, soft explosion.
New feelings. Two worlds,
separated and so close.
Worlds invisible
to all.
Old
odd chemistry
from the lucid universe
and from the hidden dark side
of Moon covered with silvery dust.
Colours of love, soft explosion.
New feelings. Two world,
separated and so close.
Worlds invisible
to all.
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Written December 31st, 2005
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Thank you Leander for your kind words. Well, maybe I am new poetry shape or style inventor, but always somebody must be first. Do not be suspicious, maybe some poets will try my new style.
I am glad if you like it. Thank you for this very interesting graphic and contest.
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This poem looks very suspiciously as if it is some kind of form I don't know it's existence from
but I actually like it (and even if it isn't a 'real existing' form, you should invent it by yourself )
Somehow, there seems to be a soothing touch embedded in there, but mysteriously enough (if that is a word) I can't really point out where
very beautifully done!
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest
I appreciate the effort you've put into this!
Leander -
Thank you reenie for your time to read my poetry. I am not sure this is one of my best, but your good wishes are welcome.
~Sonja~ -
I love your interpretation of this as well...have read a few and it is so intersting to see what others do. This is definitely very fitting for this picture also , and I wish you the very best of luck in this contest. Your words have a certain softness to them ( as in a whispered secret of love)
z
reenie
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Thank you Dawn for such a precious comment. It woth more than gold to me.
My best wishes, Happy New Year to you and your family
~Sonja~ -
Hi Sonja, You're poetry exceeds your expectations, your poetry is like a "Fine Lady" and always will be. Always enjoyable to read, always a pleasure to comment on!! Best wishes for a beautiful New year to come!! Linda
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Excellent
Beautiful Sonja! I love the layout and the poem itself is just plain beautiful, excellent job! Good Luck to you in the contest!
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I am always trying to do something different, but also always related to my own feelings. I would like my poetry to be like a Lady. No matter how dressed she is - she is always - Lady.
Thank you for your nice comment and applause Jasmine.
Happy Holiday to you and your family
~Sonja~
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Thank you for all your kind words Amazigh.
Happy Holiday to you too.
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Awesome
Hello Sonja, this is truly a remarkable piece with intriguing metaphors useage. So well written and so well derived from the picture offered. Wonderful job Sonja,Happy New Year and best of luck in this contest!! Awesome! Jasmine
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Poems like worlds cool. You do not know how much I appreciate you really for being a good mom, a good friend and a good prosaic author. I was discussing this with Iohagh and she said while at one of the big book stores she saw a cup she bought that said, Choose your friends like good authors, Stevenson. I agree, you are both. I give you my dearest friendship for just being a super nice lady. Ciao for now. Happy Holiday
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