Make me beautiful
Make me wonderful
Make me perfect, make me grand
Fix my nose then take my hand
Make me beautiful
I want to be exotic –
A model
A hunny
I want to be erotic –
A kitten
A bunny
Make me beautiful
Make me gorgeous
Make me sexy, make me hot
Change a little, change a lot
Make me beautiful
Cut my hair
Align my ears
Give me breasts
A nicer rear
Give me lypo
Plump my lips
Shoot that Botox
Fix my hips
Make me beautiful
Make me stunning
Make it painful, I don’t care
Make them want me, make them stare
Make me beautiful
Author notes
username: DAMSELx
Written March 29th, 2005
A contest entry
- Self Image...... Tell me about it.. by BeautifulCurse.
600 points, ended January 26, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies to Gold (or silver or bronze) by whispernthedark.
440 points, ended February 2, 2008, 41 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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it's not your curves that make you gourgeous its your mind, and after reading your poems well darlin i bet you could drop a grown man (or woman) to his knees.
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I love this poem so much. The theme of the poem is one that has been written about many times, and most of those times I didn't like it, but the way you put it was just perfect. The wording was simple, which made such a difference. Absolutely fantastic. Congrats on the bronze.
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I really liked this poem. The wording is simple, which makes it easy to read and it flowed really well. But you know what, money will not buy happiness. No operations will make you smile the way you think they will. Read my poem in this contest if you like "money can't buy happiness" - it relates well to your poem
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i really like this.. its very repetative but i think that's what gives this character.. it really makes alot sense.. this shows that people are willing to give up anything to be "beautiful" or "perfect" when most of us have a distorted view of both of these things.. great write.. i really enjoyed reading it.. good luck..
Make them want me, make them stare
Make me beautiful
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I didn't see your face or your body but I've read your poetry and that's enough to know that you are beautiful
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Make Me Beautiful
That was a sweet comment, thanks
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Yeah, everyone has insecurities with their bodies unfortunately, and some people take it to the extreme. You expressed this need to be beautiful very well, and made it realistic too. We can't all be models, can we? Anyway, Nice job
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oh wow this is like crazy yet amazing and how so many girls thing today which is sad i love it beauty= pain for sure
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Beauty is only skin deep and beauty is in the eye of the beholder--what one thinks is beautiful another may not, we all have our own beauty it just needs bringing out. This is a sad poem but very well written, well done.
shaz xx
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A sad commentary on the world today. When will we realize that we are all born beautiful, it is hatred, predjudice and peoples unrealistic ideals that turn us ugly. Nice write, extremely enjoyable and most poignant in todays society. Good Luck in the contest.
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i loved this poem, now and then everyone feels ugly. Nd i can relate to that, ur poems *AMAZING* I hope u do well in the contest
Happy new years
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Aww!! This is sad, but a beautiful write. This poem definitely relates to today's society with being pretty and being thin. Great job, lots of emotion, but beautiful!
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Aaaw this is kind of sad, and I can relate to this a lot. In reality..we are beautiful, it just takes time to find your true beauty. Something I continue to struggle with; on a daily basis. A lot of emotions in this, and easily related to. Nice job, and thanks for entering.
Edited on Dec 31, 11:33 because '..'.
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