How can people be that sick
hurting you while your so young
if I find that pig,I'll cut off his dick
and he'll see just how that's fun
don't worry I'll hunt him down
hurt him like he did you
I will make sure he's not found
then we'll see just how much he thinks he can do.
you'll always be my baby girl
no matter what happens in life
right now your life may be a swirl
but it won't always have so much strife.
baby girl,I know how you feel
I know that he did you wrong
we'll see when he's the one that squeals
hes just lucky I'm not your mom
he'll beg for mercy
but I'll laugh in his face
If the judge won't do nothing
I'll haven my own little case.
I know what sick pig it is
in the back of my head
It don't matter he'll get his
I'll cut him in little shreds
I'll take care of it
even if it means 20 years in jail
I'll make him feel worse than shit
I don't care if I wouldn't get a bail.
Author notes
Written December 30th, 2005
edited on october 21,2007
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I have kids that are around me to help me judge as well as some of the girls from my church. That kind of language is asolutely unacceptable.
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How Sad :(
"he'll beg for mercy
but I'll laugh in his face
If the judge won't do nothing
I'll haven my own little case."
I do have to say this hits home like deep pains do open wounds. I'm sure you read my poem innocence no more I hate sick fucks like this! Makes me want to take the law into my own hands and I pray every day that this never happens to my kids when I have them. I will kill the MF that ever lays a hand on em you know what I mean. Otherwise another great write from my girl I'm glad to see you have so many trophies I hope to one day have a huge collection. XD
Great write keep up the great work.
Much Respect
~Kimber
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Agreed..it is a well written peice...I love it...they way you word it makes it almost lyrical...good luck babe!!
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this is a very well written piece
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This is really good Miranda! I kno what it feels like to just not care sometimes about the consequences of doing something u kno is right. Great job!
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there really isn't words it explain it. i know what the girl in the story feels like. thats good that someone is there to care for her.
~Cate~
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