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Heartless

Be My Savior and I will be your downfall.
Make me happy as I make you cry,
Cry to the things I say in the night
That makes you wish I never was alive.
Be my Savior and bring to this place,
The place where I am able to kill.
I'll be your downfall from your happy days
I'll walk as you crawl on this dirty floor
I can't believe your silence... It sure does drive me insane.
I can't believe you won't fight this.
That's why I chose to make you suffer each day.
I'll be your downfall, you'll be my savior.
You can punish me darling
Take me away

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I tried
Written December 30th, 2005

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  • There It Goes
    December 31, 2005
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    u tried and conquered AMAZING JOB.... wow this is awesome.... lol i dont know what else to say but GREAT this is BRILLIANT and u have a good chance in this contest lol

    -aubrey