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Let me Live

I don't know what to think anymore
You're so cruel to me
Nothing seems to make you trust me
I've done everything to get you to try and understand me
My feelings for you are too strong to let go
You're the only one that has been there for me
It's hard when i can't count on you to be there
When I had a problem, you listened
But now it's like you don't even care if i have a broken heart or that i am cutting
Some of my  most painful things have been because of you now
It's just tearing me up inside to see that my feelings for you are slowly are getting weak
I can't lead on you for help anymore because you're the one who is making me do some of those things
I'm growing up and I'm going to yell sometimes
Maybe even throw things
But that's a part of growing up
You don't seem like you want to grow up
You act like i can only have you and no one else
Reality is....sometimes i don't want to only have you
I need a shoulder to cry on  when you are not there for me
I need someone

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Written December 30th, 2005

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  • Eusebius
    December 31, 2005
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    Bravo!

    Nicely done lover's lament! So painful! (Get rid of this guy!) Very fine poem! Bravo!


  • BiteMeWitUrFear
    December 31, 2005
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    Thanks hun! It really means a lot that you commented on it!

  • bleedingarms
    December 30, 2005
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    Oh, but it is good. Its showing how you really feel. I can understand how your feeling.... the one you love or care for, isnt even there for you anymore. There the on causing you the pain. Im so sorry your having to go through this. Its really really tough. But you will come out on the other end, stronger. Atleast thats what someone told me. I hope all goes well for you hun.
    ~Kiersten~