*~*~*
Handsome,
even regal,
he seemed to be
Mr. Right, and the
feelings he pulled from
me were electric
like the night.
Magnetized,
I could not resist
him, so excited were
my body and my emotions,
until he embraced me and I
could see two pools of
eternal damnation
staring back at
me in the dark.
They burned
my skin, piercing
through my innocence,
and I was terrified as
they warmed me deep inside.
I could see the lost souls
rise screaming for release,
rivers of blood flooding,
washing out both sinners
and Godly alike.
A shiver ran up my body,
extending to my scalp and
arms, I could feel the fear bumps
rising and my heart's rate broken
and running like a wolf.
My cheeks burned with my needs,
my breath came with difficulty
for fear was pressing on my throat,
but then, suddenly I realized that,
I was eager to be smote.
A yearning
that tugged at my
soul emerged from deep
within surging desires for
consummation of that
bloody sin pulling
me taut.
His eyes
mesmerized and
charmed, I saw myself in
them, and in their irises
I could see my own life
coming to an end.
A growling desire built
until I was on my knees,
senses more alert than they
had ever been, and as vaginal
secretions flowed, I begged
him to take me, take me
please do the deed, I
want to be wherever
you have been...
as my
face grew pale,
my blood flowed freely,
succulent scarlet lips
wrapped around my throat,
as weaker grew my body while
stronger grew my inner desire
to be consumed by him
entirely, mated for an
eternity, in his
demon fire I
was made.
Author notes
Written April 17th, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- Touch the darkness in one's eyes when you have found that you have been embraced
by a vampire... Fe by sidewinder.
100 points, ended September 3, 2002, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Wowies...it just amzaing. Breath taking. Its so pretty.
wow...just wow.
~Anexsus~ -
I agree with Maureen! Excellent write. . .
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I agree with Muffet, but I love vampires so no matter what this is a winner with me!!!!
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i thought that was perfect in every way except for the use of 'vaginal secretions' which could have been described in a more subtle or imaginative way
but a winner nonetheless! -
Thank you for the very kind remarks!
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woo damn.. this was just outstanding! definitely one of the best poems ive read to date, youre on my favorites list now.. be very afraid ;)
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brilliant write, excellent progression of events!
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damn... where do I sign up for this vampire thing?
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That was amazing. I have nothing else to say but just amazing.
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Yum! Now I want to be embraced by a vampire. Great stuff.
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Wonderful. Edgey and full of hmmm... sensual evil stuff...
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Wow
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brava! encore!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks everyone. I really did get into this one. Got myself a bit stirred up!
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Mesmerizing
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This is so good, best thing I've read in a while...God, don't you love the whole vampire seduction thing??? :) excellent choice of words, images, everything was really wonderful...great job
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Sensational poem! Very vivid images in this exciting thriller!
Congratulations! Well done! :-) -
wow! pls 'don't touch it!'
liya -
O_O .. *Just sits there, stunned, unable to say anything*
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