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Victor The Voyeur Goes To Amsterdam And Has A Very Rude Time

The aircraft made a perfect landing at Schipol and taxied to the terminal. On board were 32 Business Class passengers who nearly had all managed to slug down a couple of glasses of champagne on the 55 minute flight from London, 114 Economy Class passengers and 8 crew. And among the Business Class travellers there beat the excited heart of Victor the famous one-legged voyeur.

  Victor was first off the aircraft and, hand luggage clutched tightly in his sweaty paw, he raced as quickly as his handicap would allow him towards passport control. Victor the Voyeur was a man on a mission!

  Within the hour, Victor had checked into his hotel. He had carefully selected one of the best hotels in the centre of the city: the Grand Sofitel Demeure. Victor had readily accepted the cost of staying at such a high class establishment although he could not really afford it. The Grand had one thing going for it which made its extortionate rates worth every euro: it was situated on Oude Zijds Voorburgwal, in the very heart of the red light district. And Victor knew from past experience that its very size (270 gorgeously appointed rooms and suites) meant that the reception staff would not be able to keep track of guests' comings and goings. In other words, provided he was reasonably discreet, Victor would be able to bring unlimited dragbacks to the hotel.

  It was a beautiful Spring evening when Victor made his first trip up the street. He gazed happily into sex shop windows, he studied the publicity photos outside the sex clubs, he discussed with a charming young black bouncer exactly what acts would be on that evening at the "Fucky-Fucky Club", one of his favourite haunts. And then he got to where the hardcore whore action was at: the warren of little alleyways around the Oude Kerk. Victor the Voyeur was in Heaven!

  Victor limped along the little alleys staring unashamedly into the windows where the prostitutes flashed their wares. He sized up girl after girl, woman after woman: white ones, black ones, skinny ones, fat ones, every sort under the sun, a female for every taste! However, he was not after a quick shag. Oh no, Victor the Voyeur was looking for the right sort of girls to give him the sort of little treat he needed every so often.

  Finally, in a slightly more upmarket than average arcade, where the scent of marijuana hung deliciously in the air, mixed with a slight background sex smell, Victor found two hot candidates. He made his approach. "Do you speak English?" he asked of a slim young blonde, wearing a silver thong and a friendly smile.

  "Ja, sure I spik English. You vant good fuck wiz mee? You look nice guy, special price achtzig euros. No hurry, take your time, free condom included. Come on in!" the young lady rattled off professionally, her titties jiggling.

  "Well now," said Victor, "I was actually looking for two ladies. Do you have a friend?" This caused the young woman to laugh and to call out something probably a bit vulgar in Dutch to the girl in the next door cabin.

  "You some kind of special stud? Need two girls? No problem, Anja here and me do you real good session, extra special price discount: only hundred vijftig euros. Show you a bit lesbo stuff too. No extra charge!"

  Victor talked confidentially to the blonde girl (whose name turned out to be Nel) and to Anja and he explained what he wanted. The girls were surprised. They explained that this would mean leaving their work positions for a couple of hours and that they could accommodate quite a few customers during that time. Victor pointed out that business didn't seem all that brisk and that he was offering quite a good deal really, a little bit of luxury, with champagne thrown in, and they'd be saving on condoms too. Finally a price of five hundred Euros was agreed upon, and the two girls got dressed and followed Victor back to the Grand. The doorman raised his eyebrows as the famous pervert ushered his prize captures through the doorway. The girls were young enough to be Victor's granddaughters. But they weren't and the doorman knew they weren't. "Good evening sir," he smiled, trousering the ten euro note cheerfully. "And welcome to the Grand, ladies, have a nice evening," he added with a gallant wink.

  Once up in the room, Victor poured the girls a glass of champagne each and then stripped off, ready for action. As he got undressed he outlined the scenario to Nel and Anja. The girls showed a little surprise about the artificial leg and he was obliged to offer an additional fifty euros as a consequence. And then he turned the videocamera on.

  He filmed them as they undressed. He filmed them as they kissed and fondled themselves and each other. He filmed them get onto the bed, licking and tonguing each other expertly. He told them to make it hot and horny; he wanted them to give the performance all they had, no holes barred. Then Victor decided it was about time to get some of his special equipment in operation. So he pointed towards the bedside table and he filmed Nel feigning surprise when she found the giant strap-on dildo waiting there. Then he shot some really good close-ups of the dildo in action. How fortunate that Anja was clean-shaven, he thought. He was not worried when the girls made mistakes or looked a bit bored as they went about their work. He could always edit out the dud bits.

  Finally he found it a bit of a strain forbearing from manhandling himself; he knew that too strenuous self-abuse during filming led to unwelcome jogging, so he set the camcorder on the tripod and presented his oozing organ to the girls for them to caress, whilst he watched them doing rude things to each other at his bidding. He was very careful to make sure the camera got his explosive orgasm at a flattering angle. And afterwards he encouraged the two young ladies to have an ear-shatteringly loud mutual climax. He had told them he wanted real ones, but he knew he could never know if they were faking. However, Nel's in particular seemed realistic enough to his practised eyes and ears.

  He closed his artistic little videoplay with a double visit to the bathroom for the girls to have a a pee and a good clean-up. For another fifty euros, they even managed a dump each which Victor captured on video with consummate artistry and taste. "Hey man, dat was quite fun!" commented Anja with a grin, and Nel told Victor he was a "cool kinda guy" as he handed the girls their money and ushered them out of the bedroom door. They went happily down the corridor, back to the more mundane world of the streets. Three hundred euros apiece was not bad for an hour and a half’s easy work.

  Victor checked the quality of the recording before finishing the champagne, getting dressed and going downstairs. He had just over an hour to relax over a nice steak and pommes frites and a glass or two of the special reserve Beaujolais Villages at the hotel's famous Café Roux restaurant before his next appointment. It was absolutely essential he should be in time for the big act at the "Fucky-Fucky Club": Outrageous Else and her Automatic Electronic Shagging Machine sounded too good to miss. And, in return for a ten euro tip, the friendly doorman had reserved him a front row seat. Victor just knew his sybaritic weekend in Amsterdam was going to be a vintage one. He felt that old familiar stirring in his loins as he limped into the restaurant. 

 
[Victor]


THE END

 

Author notes

A SPECIAL DEDICATION: I was inspired to write this by an AP friend. However he wishes to remain anonymous and I shall respect that (probably).

Another tale of Victor at www.allpoetry.com/story/1719884 .
Written December 30th, 2005

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  • BeautifulButterfly
    February 11, 2007

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    It wasn't bad at all. Until I reached the part where the girls toileted on each other. I have a very open mind (obviously) but you manage to define the line and pole vault over it.


  • BabyxBadger
    December 10, 2006

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    Right... I didn't make many rules or anything on this contest, but I sed in capital letters for a poem.. so sadly this can't realli get any prizes in my compertition. good story though, nice plot. seems a bit like it's moving a bit quickly, with no details+all "ooo yeh I'm gonna make u hot". Though I think it was a good plot I suggest (not offenciveley coz it was good) that u make sure u take it slowly-more descriptive+get the reader realli believing it. thanx for entering my contest+sorry but my comment is all your getting
    xxx


    • Edna Sweetlove
      December 10, 2006
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      Dear Badger: your spelling is pretty bad. I could barely comprehend what you wrote. I have removed my masterpiece from your competition as it did not have enough grammatical errors to keep you happy.


  • bellarosa
    March 19, 2006
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    haha i've read this before, it still gets me. what a write. the fuckyfucky club...HAHAA.

    awesome.

    serena

  • comet of 1989
    March 19, 2006
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    well.... i don't really know what to say!!!! a good story i must admit, even if it was cringeworthy!!! You describe it in such detail and the words that you use... well. i have to admit that i don't usually read stories but the title drew me in!!! well done, it's ver graphic


  • purplelirpa
    March 18, 2006
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    a very rude time indeed.
    I think there was good character development. You described his motives and his mannerisms very well. Definitely captured the perversity of the voyeur and his perfectionist camera-manning skills.


  • Pretty Little Thing
    March 2, 2006
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    You're a sicko and I love you.


  • Dolphin Shaktiheart
    March 2, 2006
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    Had to write this review one handed

    WOW!!!!!! This story was hot and erotic. I really liked the "bathroom" scene. Make sure Viktor stops by a coffeshop or 2 on the way back home.


  • Poetic Sunshine gold member
    March 1, 2006
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    Wow! Very nice write...Great story Thanks for entering my contest.....Heather

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    February 25, 2006
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    Well written,you set the scene well and avoided vulgar language yet got the sexual antics across to the reader.Informative as I now know more than I did before I read it!Love and light,Yvette


  • ebaby
    January 19, 2006
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    ooh very well written, and what a story..... mm


  • Pallas Athena
    January 17, 2006
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    Very funny, and very well written. Glad to see he is still finding such things to record. And that his 'handicap' doesn't hold him back. Athena


  • lonely and free
    January 7, 2006
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    Tasteful porn

    Amazing story Edna, very funny and extremely well written. I winced a few times, although less than one would imagine!!


  • ----michael----
    January 5, 2006
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    Pervert

    What can I say Edna? Where do you get your ideas? And can I join you on the next trip? I am a damn fine camera-man, I might even throw you in a free performance of me opening my bowels.

    And I am sorry to disappoint, but I am going to ruin your reads to clap ratio and applaud you. Only because I know I have to put my hands together for the very experienced Edna, one hand simply doesn't touch the sides.

  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 5, 2006
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    Dear CGZ: I shall look to the publishers to respect my nom de plume. Victor has been to Paris, New Orleans and San Francisco and is planning on a trip to some gay cruising grounds with an infrared camera soon.
    PS "dragbacks" - "pickups"; the visual image is of picking up a stranger for casual sex and then dragging them back almost against their will..................
    Edited on Mar 19, 8:05 because 'typo'.

  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 5, 2006
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    Dear Windssong: I'll risk the clap. The machine is based on fact. I once saw a sign outside a Hamburg sex club saying they had a "Fucking Machine" (powered by a Black and Decker electric drill). Sadly it had broken down on the 12 occasions of my visits.


  • Sensual Sapphire
    January 5, 2006
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    I can't applaud? Damn it Edna why not. Three is a magic number you know. There is excellent detail in this piece. You set it all up nicely and the ram it in hard at the end. I'm hoping that your next exploit will feature Else and her marvelous machine. Does she have a pattened on that and if so where might one go to purchase such a device? I truly love your work please let me know if in fact I can give you the clap or if you only want the 2 cases!

    Toodles,
    April


  • cafegroundzero gold member
    January 5, 2006
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    I will put my points where my mouth is

    Edna, you are, as some say, "a peach."

    I very much like, and still am enjoying with my first cup of late morning cafe' au lait, your story.

    Please define, although i think i understand, "dragbacks." And may i quote you when i submit it to my lexicon's publishing company? Your pseudonym will do. Or do you prefer me to refer to "nom de plume?"

    Wonderful. I applaud you thrice the value. Yehh!

    Now, may I suggest Victor take a wanderlust, and set his sights on... Paris? Morocco? Timbuctou? Rio de Janeiro? New Orleans? San Francisco? (San Francisco, where Victor might get an unexpected epiphany of his own)...

    Dare i suggest Shanghai or Bangkok?


  • Kwame
    January 5, 2006
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    this is really great!!!i really loved reading it and i enjoyed the fantasy...maybe i'll visit amsterdam some time and have a blast too.....great job!!!keep it up!!!!


  • DarkenedAuras
    January 5, 2006
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    Well I have to say that the beginning of this was really boring but what isn't...right? LOL anyway it got better and better as it went on and overall it was pretty good.


  • January 2, 2006
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    Vunderbar!

    Dat's some hot story! Nice detail, me as an armchair world traveller and armchair sex lover, enjoyed it. If only Else would bring her act to Chicago, I would leave my armchair for the evening! Thanks, good work, Bennett

  • tightropewalkoflife
    January 2, 2006
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    Phew! hot! love the descriptivenes, I saw the whole thing behind my eyes as I was reading it. Victor sounds like he earned his reputation the hard way wink wink nudge nudge

  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 1, 2006
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    It is indeed a tribute: 49 views and only 2 bouts of applause. Wonderful. This shows readers' poor taste and lack of humour. Keep it up. I'd like to get to 200 views but onlyb 2 applauds so DON'T SPOIL IT FOR ME!


  • poetmaster32
    January 1, 2006
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    its good when someone can inspire you to write about something. so good job and keep it up. feel free to comment on my work thank you.


  • tinuelena
    December 31, 2005
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    Well now... I dare say this was one of the most enjoyable erotica reads I've been over in the past few weeks.

    Nicely done, Edna, as usual.

    Elizabeth


  • heartnsoul
    December 30, 2005
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    I sat for a moment and thought dare I? Yep I dare. While not "as" raunchy as some of your other writes, but then, considering it was written for someone, I'm sure they are enjoying it tremendously!

  • ebaby
    December 30, 2005
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    aah yeah I love how you describe Victor and his little treat he needed every so often. alot of details culture and excitement. great write, and very hot.


  • Jacob Jesus Escape
    December 30, 2005
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    a mild mannered and mundane world becomes
    a cold ball of videotape whining
    and winding around the easy
    in coils of demonic
    and legless
    glee
    as glass eggs
    burst with their ease of have
    and the earls of have been done keep doing on asses

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