I am flying so high in the sky,
What has given me power to fly?
What is higher? What’s below?
Do I even want to know?
I am stuck on this forsaken plane
Is this real? Am I sane?
How can one enjoy a life
Where only goal is to survive.
There must be light beyond dark clouds
It would free me from my doubts
I found that light in you my love
You are the meaning of my life.
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Written December 30th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love poems....I need some inspiration!! by prettygirlsduncry.
800 points, ended January 11, 2006, 56 entries
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I really liked these two lines.
"How can one enjoy a life
Where only goal is to survive."
I agree with cakestick, that love is the answer. Beautiful write here. I really enjoyed the flow of this piece and how it all came together so well. Keep up the good work.
Love always,
Kristen ♥ -
"How can one enjoy a life
Where only goal is to survive."
Love is the answer to that question, you just made that connection in my mind. Yes! -
wow that is cool! i like how you connected flying with life, very good. the imagery is awesome! great job! and good luck in the contest!! ~kami
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