It was twenty one years ago, to this very day,
That we were blessed, in the most beautiful way.
When you came into this world, in a moment of joy,
With us not caring, if you were a girl or a boy.
As the years unfolded, we saw you mature and grow,
Loving you with deep pride, as you certainly know.
So pass into the future, blessed with our Love,
As we give Thanks to Dear God, in Heaven above.
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A contest entry
- Care Enough To Write The Very Best by NotAMolly.
800 points, ended August 20, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This would make a very nice card for a 21st birthday, but I am afraid that it is not really what I am looking for. I wanted humorous cards! Nice writing, and thanks for entering!
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This would make a great card from parents to child on their 21st birthday I thought it was fab I love it keep up the great work xxx
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Very Fine
This certainly is better and much more personal than anything you can expect to find in a regular store bought Greeting Card! Good work, Bazza! --Ellis -
Cute greeting card idea. A sincere message, straight to the point and a very fatherly/grandfatherly way of expressing love. LOL
Jan -
This is so sweet! Tell you what, if this gets published I'll buy one!
Beautiful!
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well u did a great job with only 11 minutes, it had a nice flow to it and it would make a great greeting card message, good job
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