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it could have been me

It could have been me
if only you had been willing to wait
it could have been me
i could have made your life complete

if you had been willing to wait
i could have loved you
i could have made your life complete
i could have made you happy

i could have loved you
we could have made it last
i could have made you happy
i could have been the one

we could have made it last
it could have been me
i could have been the one
it could have been me....

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Written December 30th, 2005

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  • JenP
    January 5, 2006
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    I hear ya. This really makes me want to break out a tissue. I've felt this exact same way, it's so hard to stop those thoughts from resounding in your head. It'll get better, it'll take time, but it will get better


  • kirbysman Moderators member
    December 30, 2005
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    Sad and heartbreaking, but nice, lady. Very much all of them.

    Paul


  • BareBeast
    December 30, 2005
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    extremely sad...its kinda heartbreaking. very nicely written.