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I'm torn
I'm lost
I'm confused
I keep asking
What to do
And yet i get no answer
I keep asking
Where to turn
And i get no direction
Will no one help
Will no one car
Will no one feel
I cant deside
What to do
Or what to say
I dont know
What's right
Or what's wrong
Please can't someone help
Can't someone save
Can't someone keep me alive

Author notes

I dont even want help so i dont know what this poem is about...
Written December 29th, 2005

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  • JustEm
    December 31, 2005
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    maybe you do need help and you just don't want to admit it yet...but you know that i'm alwayz here for you...i havent heard from you in a long time...how is everything going?...i hope good...keep up the great work!!
    love alwayz,
    Cyndi

  • SternBlinkin
    December 30, 2005
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    Maybe your poem is a unconcious cry for help.
    No one can help unless you ask and are willing.
    I'm always here.
    love and peace
    Your big sister
    ::kiss::


  • Wicked Child
    December 30, 2005
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    I do care very much and am very willing to help
    I LOVE YOU RACHEL POTTER
    _nick_


  • Mane-E-Ack
    December 30, 2005
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    you write the weirdest poems, but hey i give you credit for atleast coming on AP, tell me how you're doing!