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Kiss The Pretty Boys Goodbye

Dress up
Play down
put your
fake smile on
and turn
back around

Kiss the pretty
boys goodbye
flash the
fake smile
that makes your
body feel high

Next time
hold yourself
closed and uninviting
don't let them
inside, don't let
them see you crying

Don't let them
have your body
turn around
do it all over
but don't tell
them your sorry




~Kiss the pretty
boys goodbye~


Author notes

I know its weird. but maybe someone can make sense of it. Its really about a hard time in my life.

After i re-read this... it sounds like im saying that Im turning lesbian... which im not. Its just about how guys use you. Just to let u all know.*smile*
Written December 29th, 2005

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  • no1special
    February 5, 2006
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    so ur not going les ... damn! lmao JK
    I love you this was great!
    xox

  • bleedingarms
    December 31, 2005
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    Thanks for the comment hun, glad you could understand it.

  • bleedingarms
    December 31, 2005
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    Heh, i get all smiley when you leave me a comment like that. Honestly, you have a way of wording things that I admire. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, and the sincerity. Im honored to be one of your fellow poets, that you think so highly of! Take care.... ~Kiersten~

  • Volst Conundrum
    December 31, 2005
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    excellencing

    one the best fellow poets i'v ever met, i worshipu ur poems...ur ideas flow excellently, and the tone set is stern and amazing, a feat few poets succeed in//

    ...and yeah true...the males have dominated unfairly over their female counterparts...whereas fenales are goddesses of grace, creations without whom civilazation would have been impossible..

    keep up th work...ur a really excellent poetess who can give tennysons and shakespeares a run for their pens if u uilize ur entire potential..these r not ardent prasies, they r observations....


  • sweetkissofdeath
    December 30, 2005
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    Awesome

    Humm...I really like it. I understand it. It is a wonderful poem....Keep up the good work. Fairwell and Goodnight.

  • bleedingarms
    December 30, 2005
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    Thanks hun, and thanks for the applause.

  • bleedingarms
    December 30, 2005
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    Thanks so much, and thanks for the applause.


  • MisJudged
    December 30, 2005
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    this is awesome. i love it so much!!

  • -Lost Words-
    December 30, 2005
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    I think I understand.

    I like the poem, it's great you did a great job

    Uhm... I like the beginning too, but the second part I liked better... I think Well, gotta go again...

    byebye

  • Broken Reflection
    December 29, 2005
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    awesome

    Wow. I really like this poem. Very interesting, and I get what you are saying. You have a great writing style. My favorite part of the poem was definetely the beginning, a real eye catcher..or at least to me. Well keep on writing, you got talent!

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