He comforts me through those long lonely nights,
He watches me while I sleep.
His hair is fair, shines like the sun,
His eyes are blue, his voice is deep.
He will rarely speak but he listens,
As I tell of my long hard day.
He will walk beside me and help to guide me,
As I go upon my way.
His name I do not know of,
But that has no effect on me,
As long as I can sense he is present,
I'm filled with happiness and glee.
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Written December 28th, 2005
Revised June 25th, 2009
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This poem was very beautiful and sweet, it brought a smile across my face while i was reading it. Very well put together and the flow of the poem was very clear and clean. Very nice job
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aw..
that was beautiful... i loved it and thought it was so sweet. wonderful write.
~~Ashleigh~~
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Beautiful. This is beautiful. Like a loving, comforting whisper in a dark, stormy night. Beautiful.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Nice
I like the flow, the syllabic flow anyway, of this...
It has a character just with its sound.
I do believe a revision in some areas could let more expression, more seperation from speach to let the poem breathe.
I hope the feelings in the poem are yours to cherrish consistantly as you blossom in the future,
Peace and Love-
Lost
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Sweet!
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"He comforts me through those long lonely nights,
And he watches me while I sleep.
His face is light, his hair shines like the sun,
His eyes are blue, his voice is deep." is my favorite part good luck -
I think this poem is precious. and it has an awesome meaning. its good to have an angel that never gets tired of listening...and always watching us to be sure that we are safe...
Good luck in my contest!
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I really like this poem. I like the idea of an angel watching over us... I especially like the last stanza, because you tell how it doesn't really matter what they're called, because just being there is what matters. ^^ Could you look at mine and tell me what you think? It's the first entry in the contest.
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I really like this poem. The emotion is strong.(: I like the rhyme except you stoped rhyming in the last stanza. The other thing that I didn't get was you don't know his name? (: It's your poem though and your story. I know it's great that you have someone you can talk to. thanks for the entry.
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I did rhyme in the last stanza
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GREAT JOB
lots of feeling i love it. you made me think about someone who makes me feel that way. i love it please contuine writing so i can contuine to read your work. keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
good message
this is a good piece. I like the message and the theme. That part is done well. I do not like the color scheme though. To hard on the eyes. However, the message does come through quite clear on this one. -
This is a beautiful poem about the lover we all want, you captured that perfectly. Keep up the writing-RAE
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I love this! The feeling of a guardian angel being with you at all times. It's like having your best friend beside you. Comforting, understanding, and loving you wherever you go. Wonderful job on this one! Thanks for sharing it.
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He will rarely speak but, he listens,
As I tell of my long hard day.
I love this part. It is so important to have someone who will listen to you. Great write!!! I love it.
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For some reason this made me think of a shirt my son has that says...you're just jealous because the voices only talk to me!.... lol No offense at all because I thought your poem was sweet and beautiful, but that is what popped into my head while reading it!
Great job, it is beautiful in pen and format!
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aw this poem is so cute! i love it how it all just flows together! you did a really nice job on writing this! its so sweet and shows a lot of emotion. great job and keep up the good work! muchlove~Rae
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That's really beautiful you should deffinetly keep it up cuz this one is goin on my favorites
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This was simply beautiful, it was filled with a clear relaxed atmosphere and just so, comforting I think. Really enjoyed reading this, it was absolutely gorgeous!!!
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Simply a beautiful piece with a message of hope. The rhythem in the poem was flawless, and a very enjoyable read all the way around. I like the idea of a Guardian Angel very much!
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Awesome! "he rarely speaks.....but listens" is the best part in my oppinion. I will come back and aplaud this and some other work of yours but im out of points. beautiful piece though
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I love it
I like tis poem.. the way you made the word flow is well done and thought out. -
This was very well done, I adore the gentlness of the write and the words flowed with the same movement. Very comforting and full of quiet kind of tranquility.
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awww thats such a sweet and loving poem i think i'll add it to my favorites list if thats alright with you
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I like this a lot.... I can relate a lot. I think you are kind of talking about the higher power thing. Well I don't call him by name either... So yea this was wonderful it made me realize that i wasnt alone in what i was thinking. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
~Laura
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Go Girl. this is a poem that I can really relate to. Great Job. Keep it up. See You soon
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excellent
Maybe your guardian angel? I love the way you worded this. -
This was beautiful,a great write,I love the flow to it,this is very comforting,a very enjoyable read.Thanks for sharing this,keep it up.
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this is so sweet!
keep it up! i love it!
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You put to words what I have known many times... and I am glad. This made me smile and feel so soothed. Thanks.
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I like this. I like the way you made it flow so very well. You're a really good writer. Keep up the great work! I love it. Very lovely. You can come by my site any time you please. Just keep up the great work!
xXFallenXx
XxAngelxX
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