Every hollow day treading on by
Weakens this frail heart-
What is supposed to symbolize affection
Is merely a life supporting vital sign
Sitting here I wait for something
The attempts to get up have failed
With just another blow
To knock me back off balance
These naive eyes sear once again
Why is there no satisfaction?
I don't know of any better
So what am I desperately longing for?
I've sought more meaning to life
Because I compare myself to others
Who not just inhale oxygen with their mouths,
But smile with them, too.
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Written December 29th, 2005
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Yeah, I commented this on your myspace, but if I do it here, I get points! Yes! Ok, so basically, this great and I loved the way it ended because it was just cool and left a lingering thought. And like I said before, the only thing to change is the that because grammatically it should be who which makes it smoother and gives it a cleaner flow...y'no'wa'm'sayin'? Ok, cool...
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