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Common Sense of Forgiveness (Pixiku)

I am not responsible for wrongs done to me.
I am responsible for my retaliation.
Forgiveness is in my best interest.

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Written December 29th, 2005

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  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    December 30, 2005
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    Lol, you are right SEA, I left out a word . Thanks for noticing. Sometimes my brain thinks faster than I type


  • SEA angel gold member
    December 30, 2005
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    Excellent

    This is excellent. I think in first line you want "for wrongs" although I might be mistaken. I may have to do one of those second round and third round contests I see done. This is my best Pixiku contest yet as EVERY entry I have read to here is trophy worthy, including this one, which is more than three. Wish me luck judging.
    Edited on Dec 30, 10:48 because ''.

  • heart on sleeve
    December 30, 2005
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    never a truer word, this sends out that message and in the end it serves true, sad how many don't hear it lol abigailxx


  • December 29, 2005
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    oh what a wonderful sentiment, this is so true good luck in the contest