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Unspoken Desire ...

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Oh! the persistence
of this "unspoken desire"
which pesters me like a recurring dream
Oh! the "eternal torment" of a heart on fire
with whispers exploding
in flames of screams ...

I shall surrender
to  "enchanted" Silence
to the fragrance of "jasmine" and hyaline streams
I shall follow the "journey of a raindrop"
of the "Crystal Dragon"
with softer gleam ...

sizzling
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myra
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Author notes

Thank you, Slekky, for the challenge! I really enjoyed this one. Your titles are so rich and descriptive ... it is thought provoking stuff. Kindest Regards, Myra
Ps. I am experiencing difficulties to submit this poem ... Hope you get it.
Written March 31st, 2002

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  • Slekky
    April 23, 2002
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    Beautifully written! I really love your last two words......lovely!