You walk right past
As if I don't even exist anymore
I'm a broken toy
Tossed to the side
In your eyes
I am nothing
Why must you torture me so?
Is this a sick game you enjoy
Tell me the reasoning behind this pain
Just tell me I'm still here
What happened to the happiness
You have become the haunter of my dreams
Vivid memories
Tearing me apart
You're crushing my soul
And ripping apart
Every single fiber of my being
Just end this now
Stop your sadisitic game
I'm not your broken toy anymore
Author notes
Otaku
Good luck with your first contest!
<3
Ashley
Written December 29th, 2005
A contest entry
- First contest, please just take a look.... by RyuKaze13.
300 points, ended January 11, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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scarey
Woaw.. Scarey... I felt like I was trapped inside a nightmare in the 3rd stanza. No like nightmares.. Good luck on winning! -
excellent
I really like this one, the imagery is great, espically in the 2nd stanza, -
Wow, this was raw, and powerful.. i'm sorry to tik that this could have beencaused by something real in your life.. that would make me sad.
Love you chibbsy, and miss talking to you. 
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Supurb
Gah Such beautiful poem from an even more beautiful human being. >
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~Ryan~
There is always light at the end of the tunnel if you want to find it badly enough.
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this is great, i love the imagery and everything, its wonderful, i love the stanza
Why must you torture me so?
Is this a sick game you enjoy
Tell me the reasoning behind this pain
Just tell me I'm still here
it sums everything up for me, i love it, wonderful write
love,
pinky
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