Love once lost
in a dream so real
now found
in a wondrous place
Now blinded by thy beauty
Covered by your spirit
of loves kindness
we again meet
Chorus
it is not the same
as it was before
for you have changed
and so have I
but our love is still strong
as it was in a dream
~*~
our love is so true
no matter the difference
or the change
our love stays
chorus x2
and forever our love will stay
never betrayed
always the same
as it was in a dream
Author notes
love is forever no matter where
Written December 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- Show Me Love by sadglory321.
350 points, ended April 16, 2006, 9 entries
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This is beautiful, very passionate and loving. I love the way u speakof love.
Good Luck!
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what a song! Im glad that i have found someone that writes songs like me. This is pretty damn good, it seems to me just from writing this song that you also write love songs. I would like to ask a question though...what sort of genre is this song belonging to? Im just interested because mine is rock n roll. By the way the title rocks like hell...you also seem to be able to write fluently about the subject, not digressing into something else whiulst talking about love.
michael
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WOW
all your songs are great, but there is an element to it that just makes it stand out. I dunno, this was truly amazing, the adjectives you used her really elegant and powerful!
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