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Dawn (Pixiku)

Fortunately, the dawn
is not contingent on
my resistance to the snooze button.

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Written December 28th, 2005

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  • Vickie J
    December 28, 2005
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    Or we'd all be snoozing with ya,huh? This was cute-gave me a smile because I know about that snooze button-what would we do without it-ugh, I don't even want to think about it, lol. Again, you composed an excellent quote. ~vickie j

  • window streaks
    December 28, 2005
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    This was really cute. So true for me...
    I like to just lie there and listen to the music that's trying to wake me up. Good job!


  • SEA angel gold member
    December 28, 2005
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    Cute

    This is cute and I think these are the perfect text colors to choose with this border. I'm glad you entered because my first smile today. Thank you.