She once asked for one word
to describe her from
all her family and friends
And now that I have them all
My Poem can begin.
*Devoted* to her *family*
she is, *passionate* and
full of *energy* a woman
who is *searching* for her
soul, her place in this world
of chaos.
She is *nice* and *tantalizing*
often giving much of herself
and asking for nothing in return
But a smile, or an acknowledgement
that she to is human and that
she hurts
*Mysterious* are her eyes, in
that *sexalicious* way ask anyone
they'll tell you her smile is *unique*
and her aura *intriguing* she is *complex*
like a puzzle and *loyal* to her friends
standing by them faithfully until the
bitter end
Her personality is *vivacious*, her
erotic poetry *yummy* like a juicy
ripe strawberry on a hot summer day
her *special* way of writing will blow
you away
Life without her in it would be
very *fuzzy* indeed, without her
*sultry* *delectable* words to get
us through our day, she is a vivid
poetess, she'll tell you she plays
no games, she'll give you her heart
if you let her, she is *considerate* that
way, but don't let the sweet side fool ya
She's *wicked* in that *scrumdidiliumpcious* way.
So as I end my little poem about one
Celticmoon, remember she is our friend
so true, and baby, don't give it a second
thought,
this ones for you.
Author notes
Damn this was hard, and challenging. Not my typical rhyming poetic piece or even my best descriptive work. But it is hard to incorporate all those words into one poem.
I chose to write a poem, based on all the words on your front page...
Written December 28th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Inspiration Please? (INVITE ONLY) by Celticmoon.
400 points, ended April 5, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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love this poem its sooo precise like givin examples and yea i liked it a lot
wishuwereirish -
Thank you wbiro
Your comments are much appreciated..(and you know you can enter one like this, and probably turn out better as well)
~Carrie -
This is a great concept you came up with, Carrie! (now why didn't I think of that, I'm asking myself!) lol You show a creative spark here, keep it burning!
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Thank you hon. I hope you enjoyed reading it, as much as I enjoyed penning it.
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My dear sweet Carrie,
You know me well! Even without my list of one word descriptions you could have and would have penned something so beautiful that no owrds could possibly do it justice. I so appreciate this piece more than you know. A truly lovely write this is my dear
Blessings
celticmoon -
Lovely!
Such a precious piece for such an angel here at ap, she uplifts so many, I know she has me, and this is well deserved for her. Great job penning this sis, love ya, your bro!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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