I'm
flying high,
so intoxicated by
your love. You do things
to me I never knew were at
all possible. One look and I am lost
within your eyes. The slightest brush of
your fingertips against my skin sends chills
along my spine. The most innocent of your kisses
melts me to the core. The scent of your essence left upon
my pillow brings forth tears of longing. The warmth and security
of your embrace fuels my desire for you even more. Against my ear,
your whisper of “ I love you” brings forth sighs of contentment. All you
do lifts me to new heights of love and passion. With you my heart travels
upon plains only lovers go. Entwined within your love, we journey upon
a raging river of sensual and sexual emotions. Together we cascade over
waterfalls of passion and desire. One touch of your hand, one kiss of
lips, one glance of your eyes and I am left breathless. All that you
are fills my longings and yearnings. You are all I want. You
are all I need. I open myself to you, give you my heart
and silently plead, take me and make me yours. You
have become my world. You have become my
everything. I am lost without you around.
My heart weeps and my soul screams
in agony when in your absence.
With each passing day I crave
you more. Quickly you
have become the
drug to which
I am now
addicted.
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Written December 27th, 2005
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GREAT
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oh wow. this piece is luvly... strong...
best of luck in my contest 
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breathless...i love your work<333!
Good luck in the contest!! -
wow.. I'm speechless.. I loved this.. I mean loved it.. the way you arranged it so there is the shape of a diamond as well. Fantastic work. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Once again thank you much for your ever so kind words.
I'm glad you enjoyed this write
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This has me nailed to my seat in awe. I am struck silent by the greatness of your words. So enticing.. so romantic.. sweet.. emotional.. and a hint of sexual. All the engredients needed to make a perfect, flawless masterpiece. I am so impressed right now. The title, the use of words, the structure... Oh, I love love the form. The shape caught me right away and just kept me captivated.. I can not say that this is just another love poem.. because you took it to new heights. You took "the just another love poem" and created so much more with it. Fabulous job. I wish you lotz of luck. Though you do not need luck with talent like yours.
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don't know how people can say its "just another love poem"...need to take into consideration what it means to be in love and to the mere fact that you take time to not only write what you feel but to write about another and how they make you feel and to confess it as you have here, is quite amazing. if u keep writing shaped poetry, i think it would be fair to any other who writes so that the trend started here...you seem to have quickly perfected this "form"...and your words and heart that shine brightly thru are most impressive.
excellent job again sweet one -
Unique
Tasteful and lovingly sensual. I didn't care as much for the form (though it IS eyecatching) as is makes it a little harder to keep one's place while reading. I think "...lifts me to knew heights..." should be "...lifts me to new heights..."
This poem is well structered and flows well. Thanks for sharing.
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Stylish
I liked the form for this piece, it's unusual. I can't lie though my favorite part was the picture above. Even though this is "Just another love poem" Your style is impecible. Great Write.
-Tha Magik Ninja -
my eyes are addicted to the shape , the form, your way with words are very nicely put` thank you for showing me different ways to express my own poems. i think all of it was great!
the eye catcher for me was
>> "Entwined within your love, we journey upon
a raging river of sensual and sexual emotions. Together we cascade over
waterfalls of passion and desire. One touch of your hand, one kiss of lips" ~~~ so sweet and sultry
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These poems always leave me slightly gobsmacked... how can you write to such a form... the perfect spacing, the perfect shape? Incredible.
I love the quickness of this.
~FadedStories -
Just a small pun intended?
I won't even make a comment on that though I so could
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Well, if I weren't addicted to such feelings before, I am now. Truly a masterpiece of flowing love and sensuality. Excellent piece sis. Keep em coming. (small pun intended)
~Carrie
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Thank you much my dear Sandy.
Your words are too kind and so very much appreciated
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Thank you much dear lady.
As always your words are greatly appreciated
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The beauty and sensuality of this piece unfolds from the very first word to embrace the reader inside the the heat of this verse. A simply luscious write!
hugs,
Nicole
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you go, girl
Wow! When you said you were going to write something new and fresh, you should've warned me that it would blow me away!
This is awesome..pure and simple. I'm sure the object of all this desire and passion is just beaming from ear to ear! I loved this! THANK YOU for sharing this and for entering my contest again! Wowee!
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If you are going to write verses like this time, I will definitly be addicted to your poetry. Nice, vivid, descriptive and also in a great shape. Bravo.
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As always sis I thank you much for your very kind words.
They mean so much to me.
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Tis only my muse I have to thank........well my muse and love. Without either one a piece like this would not have the same deep strong feel to it. It would be merely just "another" love poem.
Thank you my dear Deena your words are greatly appreciated
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I am so jealous of your ability to write in such wonderful forms like this. And the poem itself,is outstanding and very emotional to the heart. I think every woman can relate to this. Wonderful job,Bel'.
Much Love,
Deena
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sensual~
Oh wow sis
It felt like I was watching a movie as I read these steamy, sultry words from your pen....
Just loved it....Exudes passion and sensual thoughts and desires..
Steamy, full of lust......
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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I too have additions
that feel like afflictions
sometimes I even cringe
changing men like syringes.
Ciao for now.
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