My God is inside me
A spiritualism like no other,
Do I believe in unrealistic sainthood?
What an enormous feat that would be
How could anyone live up to what the "good book" writes.
Do I stand amongst hypocrisy
Do I say she exists or not?
Can't say either way...
My God
She is all around me
Everywhere,
In the trees I gaze upon, in the good and the bad I encounter
Along my journey in life,
In the womb,
My god
Is what I make her to be
If I live good, She is good
If I choose to live bad,
She is bad
When I make the many mistakes I certainly Will make
And the scores of faults and disappointments I will undertake
She will be there
My God
She is all around
She is within me
She is my own personal "Saint"
My God
She is
Everywhere
And No where...
Author notes
Agnostic
Written December 27th, 2005
A contest entry
- If you believe in God or not write something by aslanlight.
300 points, ended February 11, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Um very interesting, you sound as though you have a strong faith and this is good enough for why you believe. I like unusual writes and this is certainly that!
Georgia
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wow! this is great. thanks for entering my name is Nini and i'll be the one judging this contest. i love how you told me about your GOD. HOPE YOU BECOME A WINNER. ~Nini~
Edited on Jan 13, 7:50 p.m. because 'edited by symitar to remove spam'.
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