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Long Time

Its been a long time
Since they have seen one another
But the love they shared
Will always be there.

As they look into the mirror
Of repressed memories
They wish they hadn't done
What it was they did.

As anger overwhelms them
They start to go crazy
As they start to get anxious
They start to grow weary.

Its been a long time
Since they last picked up a
knife
Its been a long time
Since they last drove it in

Its been a long time
Since she sang her song
Of blood

Its been a long time since he drew a picture
With a razor
A knife
In blood

Oh yes its been a long time
Since they've been dead

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Written December 27th, 2005

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  • Hirestel
    January 2, 2006
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    Oh Unheard! That was lovely! I absolutely adore this poem. It has a nice flow and seems so real. I hope this isn't about someone you know. I'd hate to think of you having to deal with this kind of pain. It has a lovely flow to it. I think this is my favorite poem of yours so far.

  • spookypoptart
    December 27, 2005
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    wow, good job, it's very good,
    i can somewhat relate to this, great write