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Mirrors

Sleep, Sleep without haste to wake,
Sleep and do not wake, now;
I will be waiting for you in my silver hall
and our meeting will be final…

Lean against this window, beautiful;
peering inside this charming dream;
the fancy dream of an auburn night
while sun and moon still on sight…

Sleep, Oh, Sleep my honey maid;
Golden is the beam of your smile;
Sleep, and do not wake now…

Hover in my watery realm;
I am the Lord; willing prisoner;
without hope to be released;
from your soul. Oh, Sleep!

Sleep as you come forward
into this warded portal…
this dream is sweet, sweet…
made with figments of you…

Sleep, sleep during the quiet hour;
Ah, sleep and wake no more;
living is deeper thoroughly the mirror…

Close your eyelids, still covered with dew…
Oh, please; I pledge; let me remain;
my realm is quickly fading away…
don’t rouse child, not before is our day…

In my garden, I will be waiting,  
yours eyes to close once more,
when you cross the glimmering portal
and seize a bit of time, tiny and eternal…

Sleep, sleep again, youngling.
Now, sleep without interruption,
Sleep, so I can return with you by the portal…

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Written December 27th, 2005

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  • Faded Existence
    January 2, 2006
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    Great job.. this was a really good write! I enjoyed reading it.. you expressed the meaning well and it had a good flow to it good job
    ~Amber~


  • fall3n ang3lus
    December 30, 2005
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    lolz, you know what I mean!!!!!!!

  • Joao Camilo
    December 29, 2005
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    Oh, you must check the configurations of your computer, my friend. I did not wrote first place there
    Thanks


  • fall3n ang3lus
    December 29, 2005
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    okay, i don't usually say this, especially since we're in the same contest, but this seriously has first place written all over it. amazing write, good job!


  • ravenofdarkness
    December 28, 2005
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    good write well done


  • Selkies425
    December 28, 2005
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    Great write, very nice. The rhymeing and meaning was all there. You did a wonderful job and goodluck in the contest.

  • Joao Camilo
    December 28, 2005
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    Democracy can not be applied to everything, so, we must always have favorites. Sweet dreams


  • SmudgedInk
    December 28, 2005
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    Is it okay to pick favorites?Well this one has to be it.I had that stupid smile on my face and everything.I'm going to go sleep now .Great poem.

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