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Christmas Wish

Christmas  Wish
       
You ask me one day.
So love what is it that you desire for Christmas this year?
I thought about it but not for  too long.
With an reply of you,
I want you my dear underneath my tree.
Wrap in nothing but an red bow.
You smile rub the side of my face and said.
You’re wishes you shall receive.
If Santa tell me you been an good girl indeed.



       Merry Christmas!

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Written December 27th, 2005

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  • Melodies
    September 17, 2007

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    Hello, Levesta!

    You visited so many of my poems yesterday, I thought I might return the favor and drop in and meet you! Please tell me about yourself? I like Christmas poems and it's almost that time of the year AGAIN!


  • Blueskywonder
    November 3, 2006
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    What a lovely way to say the company of your loved one is all you require to make you happy,VERY TOUCHING WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING.


  • Levesta
    March 24, 2006
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    THANKS FOR READING MY POEM GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT BUT SINCE YOU SEEM TO ENJOY READING EXROTIC POERTY PLASE CHECK SOME OF MINES AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
    WALK PAST ME
    I DREAMED YOU LAST NIGHT
    THE RING
    NO LOVE BETTER THAN YOURS IS SOME MY FAVORS


    Edited on Mar 24, 9:28 because ''.


  • March 24, 2006
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    Merry Christmas? Have you learned to advance time or is santa early...loved this poem and wish I was slim enough to get down your chimney...manny.