15 years I've waited,
Waited to meet you,
The man everyone said was horrible.
15 years they've wasted.
After 15 years I've met you now,
I do believe we've known each other forever somehow.
"Daddy I love you" three year old me would say,
And ever since I went away,
Three year old me did stay.
I dealt with 15 years of pain,
And the only thing I did gain was,
You.
I love you dad,
I never went a day by wondering who you were,
Wondering why they took me from you.
I love you,
I wish they didn't hurt you.
I love you dad,
You're one of the most important things to me.
I'd never give you up for anything in the world.
They were wrong,
You're the best person in the world.
I love you.
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Written December 27th, 2005
A contest entry
- Number One Dad/Daughter by Malzy.
500 points, ended January 9, 2006, 5 entries
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*just sits and cries* absolutely beautiful
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When the time comes you'll know what to say.
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Hey
In a way I can see my daughter writing this, even though Im sure its a totally different situation, but I was always daddys little girl, and my dad is treating my daughter just the same.. but Im sure she'll wonder where her father is, and why hes not around sooner or later.. hopefully by then I wouldve figured out what Im to say..
thanks for entering, and good luck!
Mal -
Aw.. hambone
Im happy for you.
Love you. -
heartfelt
Kind of sad but beautiful at the same time.Emotions certainly come over in this one.Well done.
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a dad is someone special and no matter how much anyone tries they will not come between you.It is a natural bonding.It was a very beautiful poem all your emotion i could feel as i read your poem.
pure and total beauty
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