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Gypsy Night

Colors, vivid
turquoise, orange,
wild orchid,
black and white.

My wanton Gypsy self
loves life's echo in her ears
the ocean at high tide,
mockingbirds making fun
blind puppies whimpering
to find their mother's teat.
The sweet tastes of living,
honey from the highest bee's nest,
the bitter, musky salty taste of
ambrosial glistening skin.

What the Gypsy really craves
a man we love inside us,
to make the Gypsy whole again.
Without this sensual completion
I'm caressed by only darkness
in the colorless void of neverland.

My Gypsy lights up
her wanton woman self
when a lovely, caring man
wants her in loving ways.
she wants him in

black and white,
wild orchid,
orange,
turquoise,
vivid colors
throughout her Gypsy night.

Author notes

This is more sensual than erotic, but there is no category for that! I think that all women have a wanton gypsy somewhere inside her!
Written November 8th, 2005

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  • December 30, 2005
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    i can feel the sensuality and the use of color to set and change the mood, it was a very enjoyable read