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This picture is you

This picture is you

I'd know you anywhere
your super mystical stare
and what a body
my auntie, the hottie.

Your eyes penetrate me
in ways consecrate me
for I cannot lie
looking into your eyes.

All the nocturnal cats
lower heads to pat
to you a queen
purring for you, preen.

I'm a pixie shadow
against your fiery glow
your light so full
and lush your pull.

When I am lost
you illuminate my course
and I follow you
as niece princesses do.

As you leave gone
I sing your song
oh Celticmoon return soon
bring back illumination's boon.

The world of men
so full of sin
they try to touch
to dispense their lust.

Your word like wind
totally confuses all men
they inhale your fragrance
promising you all romance.

You are above that
draped in silvery black
Celticmoon is in fact
faerie heart super fat.

Men without your light
fall into blackest night
where they often fight
deprived of your sight.

by Iohagh

Author notes

One look and your pixie said its my super hot auntie Celticmoon. Yo Yo Yo.
Written December 27th, 2005

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 19, 2006
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    Sounds like my sister girl, does it not?!?!?!? Very well done piece!!!!


  • Celticmoon
    December 28, 2005
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    Iohagh my dear sweet niece,
    You could not have written a piece anymore incredible than this. Know it made me smile from ear to ear! I love it so. Seems I may need to start a new list in my collection for write that are written to and of me. I adore this piece so. Your are truly an amazing poet my dear.


    Blessings
    Auntie celtic


  • Iohagh
    December 27, 2005
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    My laptop went on the blink before I started AP so he lent me his. My uncle had been doing studies on couplets collecting it looks like thousands. Anyway, I became Amazighized. Now, I am Laura Lamarca's protege' as she has taken me under her wing and I am looking to become Lamarca-ized. Her official title is fairy godmom to whom I take bows as her pixie princess. Its incredible how quickly all this takes affect in the mind. Of course your great poetry didn't help in the fantasy department. Ciao now.


  • wbiro gold member
    December 27, 2005
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    Did you take lessons from Uncle Amazigh, Iohagh? Yes, celticmoon is above all that lust stuff, I'm sure! Only the purest love for her! (and she should hold out for it!)


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 27, 2005
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    Wow, I think you got me. I cannot do better than that but if you don't mind I will try.
    Edited on Dec 27, 3:19 p.m. because ''.

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