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Threesome

Tender tentative touches
experimental pressure
fingertips across
soft under skin,
belly soft
ribs between
tenderly yet
touching wet lips

sucking on a finger
tracing wet lines
around the edges
of nipples hardened
by thoughts not yet
formed in consciousness

giggling, pinching, pulling
one, then the other
lightly touching tenderly
thighs that gradually part
moving to the moistness
glistening ,feeling slippery
rubbing silkiness between
thumb and finger
gingerly tastes the musky
sweetness

sighing

spread these other lips and
press the pulsing pleasure
knowing where, how
fast and when
the moans
more sighs

the time flies by
no on else to know or care
when I pleasure
me, myself and I

Author notes

For those who know the physical can be lonely, but necessary - even without external loving. You must love yourself enough to give and to heal me just a little
Written October 18th, 2005

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  • Stardust100
    January 27, 2006
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    different but excellent


  • Songs of Leo
    December 30, 2005
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    Great!

    Clever! I love the twist at the end...I love surprises and this did it for me. Rediscovery is a wonderful thing


  • December 30, 2005
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    warm sensual poem, sort of poem that makes you want to self explore, and perhaps discover

  • flyingspur
    December 28, 2005
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    it turned me on..

    this is so sexy and erotic....i loved it....well written....


  • December 27, 2005
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    Clever. If only I could snuggle with myself.


  • Ice Phoenix 8
    December 27, 2005
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    Wow, this is a ..very different yet exciting poem that I have read. LOl..never the less it is an great write that im sure i will read again..lol

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