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Dance of Fertility

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Now it's time
she dons her rouge
tints her hair
dresses in trim
creates a mystique to allure a 'him'...

She is fertile
ready for seed
she does what she must
to let nature succeed
and please please
please please
p.l.e.a.s.e. let her select carefully!


 

~*~


 

She flaunts her wares
of fertility
adorned in metallics
of various sheens
with precious gems
and fragrance fair

Yet underneath
it's wild desire
sending signals
flaming the fires
it's been like this
from the dawn of the sea
and it's beckoning, beckoning
beckoning beckoning
b.e.c.k.o.n.i.n.g. a ‘him’ to come to she!


 

~*~


 

She knows quite well
 what she needs
what her feelings crave
what her passions must find
so she ventures forth
in the day and the night
she cannot help it
no matter how hard she tries
and it’s clouding, clouding, clouding,
clouding, clouding, clouding
c.l.o.u.d.i.n.g. her mind!


 

~*~


 

"Now that she has you
and the ceremony's done
remove your attire
now that you're one!
Partake of her!
Fulfill your desires!
Take her to the heavens
then take her higher
higher higher higher
higher higher higher
take her h.i.g.h.e.r.!

~here~
~you~
~now~
~she~
and her irresistable, full-blooming
f.e.r.t.i.l.i.t.y.!


 

 

Author notes

...underlies all human action!

Contest Note: Option 1
Written December 27th, 2005

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  • Rhygirl60 silver member
    January 11, 2006
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    ENough passion without a surplus.

    Exciting and full of passion without making this reader feeling like a peeping Thomasina.I must go and find out how your other poems make this reader feel


  • Sunkissedrose
    December 28, 2005
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    I think this was a wonderful piece, and adds to the meaning of the picture. Good luck in the contest, and I would like to continue reading more of your works.

    ~Carrie


  • Celticmoon
    December 28, 2005
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    I know it's been changed and you've been tinkering with it.....you always do! I read it when you posted it as I have with every entry but waited to reread and comment for I know so many of you like to tinker and tweak later on


  • wbiro gold member
    December 28, 2005
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    Well, I'm glad you waited until now to read it, Bel, for I've been tinkering with it so much it has been altered and changed greatly since I posted it! (and glad you see yourself in it!)

  • Celticmoon
    December 28, 2005
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    Well now my dear Wayne,
    This is lovely and oh so sensual.... I love it!
    Your talent never ceases to amaze me, guess that's why you're on my favorites list
    This piece is just so perfect in everyway. It fits the picture really well. And on some level it even fits me, if that's even possible.......lol

    Blessings
    Bel


  • Sonja
    December 28, 2005
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    That was a real dance of poetry, different form most of poem a read recently. Great done. Good luck.
    ~Sonja~


  • SexyAngel0418
    December 27, 2005
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    WOW... This is aweosme!!! You did a great job AP dad!!! I really like this!!! It is very cute!!! Good luck in the contest!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • December 27, 2005
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    Sensually romantic!

    Awesome! I love this poem, and it sound so good, written so well that readers can experience every texture of sensual pleasure!
    Lovely my brother tomerick, and that big cat pic is magnificent!


  • wbiro gold member
    December 27, 2005
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    Thanks, Di... and happy holidays!


  • masterblaster gold member
    December 27, 2005
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    Hi my friend, yes I liked this write it is very sensual without being crude and speaks so many truths,great write, all the best in the comp, sorry am out of points and applauses,does happen sometimes,lol, hugs Di

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