Please don't let go
I love you more than you know
Take my hand, I'll help you up
Just try, for my sake, to not give up?
You're the most beautiful thing
That's ever happened to me
I don't care about diamond rings
-You make me feel free
All the things you say
Make the pain of this world go away
I couldn't live without you
So don't tell me to give up on you
Don't tell me to hate you
That is something I could never do
I don't care if you will f*ck up my life
My life will still be perfect
So put down that knife
I cannot live without you
I swear that's true
*I love you*
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Written December 27th, 2005
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aww this is such a goood poem it is soo amazingly sweeet. Dont worry though everything will be fine XxX it is hard to watch the person you love hurt though isnt it. I mean Im a bit hipocritical as I am no better myself but youare so sweet to write a breath takingly good poem for the man that you love
xXxoOo
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lol how did you know?!! ahem. yeah but he can never see this poem ok?!!
love you xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Awww honey, I know how much he means to you it must really hurt watching him suffer, you portray your emotion really clearly here, great work. Keep at it & stay strong, luvya xxx
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