I want to paint
you a sweet picture of fiery
passion. Fill it with pleasure and devotion.
Lay you down, make you the very canvas upon which
I shall paint. With velvet lips I shall splash your bare flesh
with red flames of lust. And with my, oh so tender touch, I shall
douse your soul in a prismatic sphere of euphoric heaven. My emerald
eyes will stir your deepest hunger. The intensity of my heat will spread
through your body like wildfire. Your desires, drenched and
fulfilled by my heart and soul's endless longing to please
and be pleased. You are the canvas and I,
the paintbrush, together creating
a masterpiece of never
ending passion.
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Written December 26th, 2005
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Glad you enjoyed it sweetie
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oh this is nice and sensual and so very loving I am glad I have gotten to read this one it is so tender and passionate filled with love well done!
love and light
Blaze -
Thank you for entering! I enjoyed the word choices of this poem very much... They perfectly expressed the point you were making, and the imagery was amazing! Good Luck!
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How very beautifully and wonderfully romantic; love this!
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Thank you for your very sweet words.
I'm pleased you liked this piece. I do hope the happy couple also enjoys it.
Many blessings and much happiness to them
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This is beautiful and I just adore the subtle, but romantic imagery that you have infused into your words here. This will make a wonderful addition to my daughter's book. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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i think this is one of your better "descriptive" poems in confessing passion and desire and of course love the one you hold so dear to your heart, i think i've become "enamored" with this list of poems (holder of my heart) because it is so unusual to see one write with so much passion and yearning for a loved one...the confessions to them, the love obviously evident in every write...there's no doubt how you feel and how they make you feel. TAKE NOTES WOMEN, you treat your guy the way she does hers, most men will worship u...lol...
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Thanks Deena,
It wasn't easy but once I got it started the rest was history
I had fun with it
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Awww thank you hunny.
Much appreciated
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Oh yes, definately a great write especially without being able to use the word LOVE!
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! 
~Ats~
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What a great challenge and you being the successful poet that you are did it with ease....I am so jealous! Well done,Bel' very pleasing to the heart.
Much Love,
Deena
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yeah... I knew it would be kind of hard for some people... this was good... Keep up the good work though, and good luck in the contest!!!
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Thank you for your kind words.
I must admit this was a bit of a challenge in the begining but once I got it started the rest came to me so easily. -
WoW! I loved how you metaphored (I am not sure if it a real word but I am making it one) all of the poem into an art type theme... You have a nice picture by the way... this was really great... I loved it... I never read about someone turning someones body into a canvas... Keep up the good work!!!
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This is sublime, I love every image you have created, and the sentiment is invaluable. Creates tingles down the spine and an ache in the heart, full of longing and wanting. You have penned a masterpiece... the best I have read in a long time
Much love and light
Karen -
Always sis you rock
me out my socks
jumping up I knock
my head taking stock.
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Oh darling, daddys comong to bed now...maybe a cold shower too!
The wife says thanks! This is HOT! The overheated Shaker -
Even the shape of the poem says lips... well well done done!
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I gotta say again! WOW!
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WOW WOW WOW! I LOVE THIS! I love everything about this. The way you wrote it. The way it looks, sounds, feels! EVERYTHING!!
Hey if you want, you should check out my poem called Painted. It's along the same lines as this.. but a little more edge, you know!
GREAT POEM!
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