Cold drink chillin in my right hand
Vodka, Kahlua, milk and some coke
I could drink these all night; they're just my brand.
Cold drink chillin in my right hand
Just a little bit, and I really can't stand!
My tolerance is low, and that's no joke
Cold drink chillin in my right hand
Vodka, Kahlua, milk and some coke
Sleepin' off the night before,
I think I might need a little gatorade.
My eyes are blurry; my head is sore
Sleepin off the night before
The next day I always swear, no more!
Then, I always forget so many times I've played
Sleepin' off the night before,
I think I might need a little gatorade.
Author notes
This triolet takes its italicized lines from When the Sun Goes Down By Kenny Chesney. Enjoy.
Written December 26th, 2005
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Thank you for your comment. It was a new form to me not too long ago!
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Ive never heard of this form before, and i do love form poetry. I might take a look into this and maybe try and write a few. Great poem
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LOL!!! Gatorade is a sports drink, actually named for the a sports team called the Gators, I believe. It has lots of electrolites that help when you're hungover and severely dehydrated!
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I could sing it ?
For the uninitiated, what on earth is 'gatorade'. It sounds like mashed alligator with vodka and lemonade! Yuk! A rhythmic song of much energy touching certain wave lengths more than others. As generations pass, more is the pity. Thank you Lyndon -
lol I enjoyed the reading of this poem alot and also had a great laugh. Now I'm thirsty... Can I have a drink please?? lol Thank you for sharing your work with me... and for the wonderful gift of your creative pen. Blessed be, Nena.
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Heeeee! nice to see some people can find uses for Gatorade other than just dumping them on other people at sports event...maybe it all ties in somehow...
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Well, another poet on here held a Christmas Triolet contest, asking us to start with the line from a Christmas song. I enjoyed it so much that the two of us will soon be running a contest with the same idea, only instead of Christmas songs... it will be songs from a variety of artists. I'll send you the link once it's posted!
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Once again, anothr great write, where do u learn all these styles from? I would love to be able to write like this, well done. xxx QueenT ooo
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Whoops! How could I forget the Kahlua?? Fixed!
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A Smith & Wesson is not just One shot of Vodka, milk and some coke. Look it up. You left something out.
But nice poem, I really liked it.
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