I’m living in a world I am best forgotten in.
Who I am hates who I’ve been.
I’ve been on top, I’ve hit rock bottom.
I have many flaws, anyone can spot them.
I’ve been loved, I’ve been hated,
I was there when my parents demonstrated,
How much they hated each other, but loved me,
I’m not happy, am I supposed to be?
When I was low I was a danger,
And everybody thought I had too much anger.
What was a supposed to do?
Lose the real me and start being you?
But I didn’t, I kept being me,
My life wasn’t as I’d hoped it’d be.
There was a lot more hurt and a lot more pain.
If I could do it again I would do it the same.
Because what’s worth changing,
That isn’t entangling,
If you changed anything it would change who you are,
Why do that? Because to some people you’re already a star.
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Written December 26th, 2005
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keep on rockin'
This is a great poem. I love the emotion! It's awesome. You're poetry is very emotional, and you're only 13. things move pretty fast in life don't they? Well just remember that here there's a whole community of poets who love you! -
WowWowheck yeah
Awesome! The emotions and message are powerful. Thank you for sharing. You seem to have poured your heart out! Kudos for the bravery and intense revelation. -
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this!!!! MARVOLUOUS!!!!!!!!! this isperfect!! teh rhyming is beautiful, the words flow great, i love this poem!!! great and wondeful job!!!!!!!
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pinky
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