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Guardian Angels Watches Over You

You are the future's glorious precious little seedling,
filled with hope and sunlight this world is needing.
I see great horizons in the light in your expressive eyes,
when you smile you captivate so many hearts in delight.

Beautiful child no one can limit the heights you can reach,
I have great anticipations of your abilities once unleashed.
Your education is of special importance for you to grow,
but there's just one thing more I would also wish you to know.

Your fertile future is only just at it's beginning of growth,
your going to raise your face to tomorrow's sun rays, glow !
Bright and able are you to climb a trellis into blue skies,
growing, glowing brightly into a future youth supplies.

There's so many fantastic vistas you've yet to enjoy and see,
hold tight to your good dreams,be all you can be.

                                    ~~~Suseann~~~

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This might be more for an older child maybe.
Written December 26th, 2005

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 30, 2005
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    This is incredibly touching! Such a wonderful inspirational write and so full of truth and heart. It has a subtle enchantment that your spirit so wants to touch it as you read it. Beautifully done Blessings, Gypsy


  • wishintreeUK
    December 27, 2005
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    A very heartfelt poem written to reach the very heart of your reader. Your rhyming is very good and your poem flows beautifully making it effortless to read, well done!

    ~Katie~


  • capricornpoet
    December 27, 2005
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    for all children of the world

    Children everywhere are like dreams, and should have dreams
    to live for, wonderful tribute to children of all the world.
    A promise of a better world , weaved here.


  • Heart Sutra
    December 26, 2005
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    This is very loving, kind and beautiful. It is a wonderful poem to share with children. Thank you for entering it.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 26, 2005
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    Blessed be those who drop to their knees to see the light in a child's face. As always, dear sister, you pen a pure and passionate beauty.


  • Taranand
    December 26, 2005
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    Beautiful poem about the love and encouragement we can share with children to strengthen and uplift them. All children need to be encouraged in this way and your poem provides such a divine example of this. Lovely work. Peace and love, Tara


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    December 26, 2005
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    A wonderful tribute to the children of Africa suseann. I'm working on one too. The whole situation leaves me a bit speachless but I'm working on it Beautiful job.

    ~Lyrical


  • Sherry gold member
    December 26, 2005
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    Suseann,
    Beautifully written my dear your touch of love
    and encouragement flows like a river in meaning.
    Children older need to feel important and worth
    it and as if they aren't nobody's. You would be
    a great foster parent to encourage a child as this.
    Hugs to you, Me

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