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i never new, see this my new view

invisible....
all but and only divisible
i wait for blind eyes to see
i scream now for the one i call me
please please please hear my plea
this lonely prison has got the best of me
i wish but to fly away
from this cage my lift
this stage my life
this worthless existence
this endless strife
i need a
surgical knife
no elixir of life
Just to invisible hands
that see
just like me
so no longer am i alone
my wings have grown
i need none but the chance
my life to enhance
to live free
alone without me
to this world i bid adieu
my muscles squeeze tight
and i leave the bitter dust
the same dust i once knew
this new feeling is like one i know
like something from the past so far ago
before the cold wins did blow
before the heated embers raged with fire
before the firest drop of dew
this feeling i knew
but why am i feeling so good
where is this peace from
sense when am i allowed the sweet fruit of life
where have my chains gone
why am i free
how why oh no could it be
have i been set free from me
is this death my escape
i don't want to go
i scream as my body takes new shape
there is so much i have to do
so many people i wish i knew
how is this my hours so few
i never thought I'd get this view
its to late
i can do no more
even now my wings grow sore
i can not stay any longer
all i can do is hope you who i love
become so much stronger
love life embrace its sweet kiss
or you to this life will miss

Author notes

Hello to anybody listening this one longer than the ones i usually write... suck it up and get over it lol. jk. tell my what you think is all i ask. because i'm using a different style.
Written December 26th, 2005

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  • Haunted Elegance
    December 27, 2005
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    Not my favorite

    well u mis-spelled a.....lot of words lol. To be honest....well duh i dont think u wood like me lying.....but i kinda got bored with reading it. Mainly cuz it didnt really hold my interest for such a long poem. Well, u can do some constructive critisism on one of my poems now lol.

  • bloodless
    December 26, 2005
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    !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

    you suck bloodless i hope you die a horrible bloody death.