Forevermore in love we'll be
In Heaven on earth, ecstasy
While our spirits to new heights soar
In love we'll be forevermore
Our hearts will sing, our souls will dance
In an everlasting romance
With a warm glow on everything
Our souls will dance, our hearts will sing
Our love will last, 'til life is through
Never stale, ever fresh and new
With experience, vision vast
'Til life is through, our love will last.
Author notes
Best wishes for a long loving life.
Written December 26th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Love Is In The Air~ [CONTEST] by Touchof1der.
300 points, ended January 15, 2006, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopelessy Romantic Guys by Ice queen 17.
300 points, ended April 5, 2007, 37 entries
Silver trophy winner
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400 points, ended November 8, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - silver I by Salty Hibiscus.
450 points, ended February 6, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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lovely and romantic words you crafted. rhyming is awesome, too. thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Aww! Such a cute romantic poem. I love the way you start and end each stanza with the same phrase or same two phrases flipped. Good luck in teh contest!
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wow this is truly amazing it came of very spiritually romantic to me and i love that great job good luck.
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Such a sweet poem, everlasting love is a most precious and wonderful thing, surely as you say, "souls will dance and heart will sing"
Well Done!
~Katie~
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As Mom has said, my fiance and I have enjoyed reading these entries. You guys sure are making it hard on us!
This is such a beautifully penned poem. I love the middle stanza of the poem. That speaks so much volume and really sets off the whole message of the poem. Thank you for entering. Best wishes.
Curtis and Christina
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Thank you so much for entering such a sweet poem in my contest. Christina and Curtis have had a great time reading all the entries and I know they will be touched by your words. Good luck!
♥ Touchof1der -
Very optimistic look at love, the kind we all dream of. Well written with a strong rhyme scheme. Best of luck in the contest.
Becky
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A very nice song of hope, full of the first blush of love. Keep writing.
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Awww! So sweet! This is a wonderful poem, a beautiful dedication to love! I especially love the second stanza:
Our hearts will sing, our souls will dance
In an everlasting romance
With a warm glow on everything
Our souls will dance, our hearts will sing
Thank you for sharing it with us!
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