Seeing reuniting family members
Seeing the happiness in them
Remembering not seeing my father
Tears of regret going down my cheeks
Seeing loved ones hugging
Wanting to hug my dad
Wishing he would be here
Praying to God that it would happen
Walking up and down the terminal
Looking to see him standing there
Running towards his open arms
Choking back the tears....
Sadly this will never happen
This will remain just a dream
Remain just a hopeful prayer
Maybe I should have prayed with faith
A silent sigh, shaking my head
Shaking the thoughts from my mind
Boarding the plane now....
All hope has now been lost
Author notes
I was sitting in the terminal waiting for my flight to arive. For those of you who don't know, my dad was suppose to get in at 2:30 and my flight was leaving at 2:05. For those who don't know the whole story and want to know, just ask me. Anyways, I was just seeing like the family members hugging and it inspired this poem. Anyways, just to let everyone know, it ends up that my dad ended up canceling his trip to Colorado Springs, so even if I had stayed home he wouldn't have come... heh, I wrote this poem before then, though so I figured I'd still post it.
Written December 25th, 2005
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wow this was GRATE!!!!!!!!!! -
This isn't one of my better poems so I'm glad you still liked it. Thank you very much for your comment and applause
It is greatly appreciated 
--Tim -
awesome
this is one of the most heart wrenching poems ever...but very well written! you can just feel the emotion you were feeling while you were writting. Brilliant! thanks for sharing -
I am so sorry Tim! Oh man, I cant tell ypou how sorry I feel! Wow. I miss you! If you ever want to talk, write me!
Great write!
Grace -
Well that was soo sad.. but really good! Great emotion and... great way of expressing it... good write!
~Amber~ -
Impressive
Go TIM!Great poem!Good write..Seriously..Somehow I think you're a great poet!
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this brought tears to my eyes... :'( sniff...
i just cant imagine... wow... je te plains! >.<
i like this beaucoup, you can really feel the emotion... i no it's so tough seeing ppl loving each other...and knowing u can *never* be a part of it ... sigh...
mushy -
mm i know how you feel...my dad was in the navy for most of my life and i hated the airport cause thats when i would always say good bye to my dad.
just stay strong and know that things happen for a reason...what that reason is i still dont know...im sure we'll figure it out soon
your ap daughter
taylor
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Winderful Tim!!!!!! Love it!!!!
~Candi~
Keep up the good work!! XO
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