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haiku (on haiku)

it's worth a thousand
words but what if you could do
it with 17?

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Cheers to Quinn the Eskimo for the insight and practically the whole haiku itself^^
Written December 25th, 2005

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  • sense surreal
    July 30, 2008
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    haiku on haiku
    definitely you've done it with 17

    kumbaga ikaw ang haikuqueen sa tatak PiNoy


  • ficklefeather
    December 27, 2005
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    for Quinn the Eskimo
    -thank you very much for the comment, and, again, the backbone of the piece^^


  • December 26, 2005
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    aaww. well this is very flattering. a great haiku fickle! haha. keep up the awesome work!

  • gingergreentea
    December 25, 2005
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    aaaah, this frustrates me so. I cannot for the life of me write a haiku. my short attention span cannot stretch out a mile. haha. i need lessons. re:relearning poetry=dealing with traditional forms. lennon loved haikus. so i'm gonna start torturing myself with them. hehe.

    Loved this.


  • Ygg
    December 25, 2005
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    Nice twist in this haiku Lovely work!

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