You came to me
Dark
Dangerous
Eyes shining
Teeth gleaming
A predator
Stalking
Victims
You panting
Inhaling,
Breathing
My scent
I the target
Bowed
Quivered
Trembled
You took me
Full moon
Howling
Fire burning
I conceded
Capitulated
Surrendered
To your need
You the wolf
Conquering
Claiming
Victory
I your bitch
Kneeling
Howling
Knowing…
I won!
Don’t you know?
Wolves
Mate forever.
Patricia Gibson-Little
Author notes
I'm not sure if this works or not.
Written September 4th, 2001
In a list
A contest entry
- I WANT A WOLF POEM!! I want it to have SPIRIT! All the wolves souls poured into it!!! As before t by SilentWolf.
30 points, ended May 5, 2002, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The wiles of the female, what chance do we stand. Love this a beautiful write.
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Great job!
Very fast paced, very memorable, I like this.
Thankyou for commenting on my poem, Sea. I really appreciate your enthusiasm and I'm glad to knoww I inspired someone, That's always nice. Keep on writing! I'd like to hear your comments on some of my other poems as well, they seem your style. By the way, how old are you? I'm only 14 and I keep accidentally running into poems I really don't want to see, I like to be forewarned. -
u didnt win? how could they not give u metal? heck u won in the poem atleast, i like ur sense of humor, u funny, and its late.
Jiselle -
Great Work!
This is excellent. I saw this contest and the only thing I could think of was ooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuu! Not to be funny either.
The wolf is a terror to me. But you! You tamed this wild animal, gave in to it, and made it yours forever. What an imagination.
BRB, going to see which trophy you got...
What???
Okay, I'm confused, I was not here in May. Only 1st and 2md place trophies, and for 30 points. (what the...) I'm glad it's gotten better. You should have won, and I won't even bother to read the others...I know, biased opinion. I can be that way sometimes.
Great Work!
Thanks for the beautiful comments on feelings. I love that poem, it's one of my favorites! -
Oooh.. I like how you said 'I won' when it seems you were defeated you really won as the wolf's mate. It works ^.~
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