I wanted you tonight!
I hunger
Ravenous for you
Creamy dew upon my tongue
I long
To taste your sweetness,
As I devour you
I ache
For the decadent Feeling,
Of you, clinging to my lips
I crave
Your nectar
Moist and sensual to consume
I mourn
Your loss
Yearning to savor you
But alas…
Someone ate my cheesecake!
Patricia Gibson-Little
Author notes
I hope this wasn't cheating? But it didn't say the cheese had to be in it's original form.
Written February 20th, 2002
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Cute.
LOL. Cheese cake??? Had me going. -
A gloriously wicked piece of humour ... erotica is spiced nicely by a pinch of devilment!
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Delightful !
Oh! Horse feathers, poet Patricia!
Cheesecake indeed, indeed...
Do you think I believe that -- duh!
No, not that kind of seed!
I think you had more in mind
Than cheesecake, yes indeed!
What it was was lemon meringue pie
To fully fulfill your need! -
Excellent write
Love this great twist at the end, had me fooled- which isn't hard! -
lol... i knew something was coming! i luv the bang at the end of your poems! haha itz great!
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haha u tricked me...oh well...thanks for the comment on my piece...its much appreciated
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I had to go back and read a older work of yours and what I thought was right it is just as good as the new writes. I actually have cheesecake in my fridge. Anyway, be sure I will read more when they come.
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wha? where, oh u devil u, u were pulling my tail! u even made me blush! and now i have a craving for cheesecake.... lol, but all we have is pumpkin pie! I wonder if u have some pie. Nope someone eles stole it first, lol. I love the humor in this one
jisellle
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