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Fragile

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Fragile, she is beckoning me
I long to catch her 'fore she breaks
though tempting she, I tremble in fear
her dark allure begins to take.


 

Enchanted as the evening snow
glistening in a curtain of ice
encapsulated in a shrouded rose
my warm touch brings her back to life.


 

F.o.r.g.o.t.t.e.n. beauty on her breath
a scent of rapture in the air
floats and blooms upon the past
and leaves her darkness s.h.a.t.t.e.r.e.d. there.


 

Her long, cold winter thawing thus
slow and painfully from the dead
still vulnerable, yet I take her not
and lay this glass rose on her bed.


 









a companion piece to Crimson Glass Roses by Scarlet Whisper




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Written December 24th, 2005

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  • thepoisonpen
    December 30, 2005
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    Gorgeous. Dont stop writing
    xxxxxxxxxxxoooooooooooooooo


  • Z---
    December 28, 2005
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    lovely, I almost shed a tear here...he he


  • wbiro gold member
    December 27, 2005
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    thanks, Pin, you induced me to go back over it with a fine tooth comb... and I added a word! (I'm still debating over using 'fore or before, as the 'fore is simply for the flow...)


  • just rob gold member
    December 27, 2005
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    This is a beautiful poem. The image of the rose defied the cliche, and left a lasting subliminal picture. Thanks for a calming read and a smile that I really needed.
    Peace, Rob

  • wbiro gold member
    December 26, 2005
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    thank you very much, Rosita... you do have a lot in common with this piece- the whisper and the rose! (hey, nice title for a future piece!) lol


  • requiempoet gold member
    December 26, 2005
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    THis is a great piece and the picture and back ground is astounding with the words that are splashed beautiful on this page!!
    keep that poetic mind flowing
    Rosita


  • wbiro gold member
    December 26, 2005
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    thanks, my brightest sexy angel!
    from your dear old dad!


  • SexyAngel0418
    December 26, 2005
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    WOW... this is a great poem AP dad!!! It is very beautiful!!! I really like it!!! Goood luck in the contest!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • Celticmoon
    December 25, 2005
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    One cannot help but sigh many times as they read this piece. The beauty within your words is simply breathtaking. You have penned a masterpiece to perfection here my dear!

    Blessings
    Bel


  • wbiro gold member
    December 25, 2005
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    thank you sister sweetsilver! Glad you enjoyed it!


  • December 25, 2005
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    wonderful write!

    Written with tenderness and loving care... I love how you are arranged this poem, the words are fantastic and very meaningful!

    Good work, brother!


  • whispersoftly
    December 25, 2005
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    stunning what a beautiful write i could see the gentleness and fagility encompassed in your words bro well done and good luck in the contest love Cheryl


  • Kilrah
    December 25, 2005
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    wow, this is beautiful, I love the way you emphasis words. This is a really great poem. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 24, 2005
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    'Fragile, she is beckoning me I long to catch her 'fore she breaks though tempting she, I tremble in fear her dark allure begins to take...' Beautifully dark, Wayne...well done, Poet... Wanda


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 24, 2005
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    Sigh....how beautifully awesome this is! An absolutely gorgeous piece! Thank you so much for sharing! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you and yours! ~Angelofgod~


  • wbiro gold member
    December 24, 2005
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    Thanks greatly for the comment, sis...


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    December 24, 2005
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    ~sigh. Yeah.

    ~Me


  • wbiro gold member
    December 24, 2005
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    thank you, daughter, and Merry Christmas!


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    December 24, 2005
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    Daddy!
    I loved reading this one!
    as all always you write wonderful poetry
    love yah
    your dark whispering scarlet angelic daughter

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