Doom and Despair
In the darkest of times I am alone,
surrounded by fear my soul is in stone.
Awakened by dread, everyday of my life,
an unhappy woman, a terrible wife.
Sadness and doom, envelops my soul,
I'll never feel joy, I'll never be whole.
In the depths of despair, I hope for no other,
be close to my heart, my wonderful mother.
I pray for the day, to end all of my fear,
no more sorrow or pain, my Lord to be near.
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Written November 21st, 2001
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don't touch it!
Aww, this is beautiful in its own sad way :(! *smile*! great write!
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Very nice true words that bring out to others the visual text images. Both mind and soul will feel such words and will burn in thier memories for a time later the very words will come to them. All my writtings have proved to be just that so far in my Poetic Prophecy series I just finished. Very good. : )
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I agree with Tina. I feel not good enough for my fiancee as if I'm just 'there' as a piece of furniture at times... But as God says he will never give us more than we can bear and this too shall pass :) very nicely done!
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truly inspiring piece...the pain & sadness is overwhelming in this piece...
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